Here She Comes

A well-endowed gal relished baring
her assets. She pranced about wearing
skin-tight skimpy dresses.
Such clothing impresses
the men, who just drool and keep staring.



June 2, 2019

syllable count:  9  9  6  6  9
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 9:26 AM
So sad for she is more than this but thinks she shows off her best assets. Great lim!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Right!? I had a coworker who said this one guy kept looking at her bosoms. But who did she put them out there for? Same guy came in my office...I was alone and closed the door behind him...gulp. Automatically I pointed to pictures and said have you seen my husband and kids. O boy!!
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 9:49 AM
Thanks so much, Kim! What kills me is women who go around half-naked, then complain about the ogling! They like it--or they'd put on some clothes. Janice
Laurie Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 6:47 PM
G'day Janice … and you don't have to be a mind ready to know what they're thinking - thank you Janice - Lindsay
Canerdy Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 10:31 AM
Thanks, Lindsay! :-)
Allison Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 4:27 PM
nice and bawdy Janice, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 5:41 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! Janice
Kitchin Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 4:47 AM
Janice, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick!
Canerdy Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Tania, THANK YOU so much for placing my entry! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 6:20 PM
Sure enjoyed this one too!
Canerdy Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:05 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Sergi Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 7:04 PM
Hi Janice: That was very bawdy you naughty(ha ha) I really enjoyed it and I wish you well in the contest! (I think you meant bearing and not baring)
Canerdy Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 7:27 PM
Thanks so much, Ralph! As a verb, "bare" means to show or reveal. Janice
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