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Here She Comes

A well-endowed gal relished baring her assets. She pranced about wearing skin-tight skimpy dresses. Such clothing impresses the men, who just drool and keep staring. June 2, 2019 syllable count: 9 9 6 6 9

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/2/2019 9:26:00 AM

So sad for she is more than this but thinks she shows off her best assets. Great lim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2019 12:51:00 PM

Right!? I had a coworker who said this one guy kept looking at her bosoms. But who did she put them out there for? Same guy came in my office...I was alone and closed the door behind him...gulp. Automatically I pointed to pictures and said have you seen my husband and kids. O boy!!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/2/2019 9:49:00 AM

Thanks so much, Kim! What kills me is women who go around half-naked, then complain about the ogling! They like it--or they'd put on some clothes. Janice

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/13/2019 6:47:00 PM

G'day Janice … and you don't have to be a mind ready to know what they're thinking - thank you Janice - Lindsay

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/14/2019 10:31:00 AM

Thanks, Lindsay! :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/12/2019 4:27:00 PM

nice and bawdy Janice, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/12/2019 5:41:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jan! Janice

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/12/2019 4:47:00 AM

Janice, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/12/2019 8:24:00 AM

Tania, THANK YOU so much for placing my entry! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2019 6:20:00 PM

Sure enjoyed this one too!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/5/2019 10:05:00 AM

Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/3/2019 7:04:00 PM

Hi Janice: That was very bawdy you naughty(ha ha) I really enjoyed it and I wish you well in the contest! (I think you meant bearing and not baring)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/3/2019 7:27:00 PM

Thanks so much, Ralph! As a verb, "bare" means to show or reveal. Janice