Here I Love You

in my foolish quest for scrambled words, your inspiration becomes a heady sensation carrying me gently from the troubled traffic of my desecrated hours, as if i were entering under the skins of our candle lights: bringing me to embers of moments terribly free, like you.. and there, we become weightless on our open map---the meridians and continents passing through the mists of time and space, oh how my lips and this my striped soul adore you: wandering effortlessly on the terraces of our own love, war and peace. ~ often, at daytime, at night call when stars seem to cover their cherubic faces and i feel the throb of my faltering heart, your company i embrace, telling me how to live...as our sheets grasp in surrender; my tender moans start to bleed... then i become one with your skin, bones, and hands: through sips of wine and tea, i have to say today and after: ~” Here I love you and the horizon hides you in vain. I love you still among these cold things…” ~ i feel i am everywhere; i think of how many i can be with our candles and songs. ........ *excepts from Pablo Neruda’s “ Here I Love You” * please allow use of small caps ........ .. ......... Poem for Frank H.'s Best Contest by nette onclaud
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Sweetheart Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 7:33 AM
congrats Nette luv on a magnificent write and first place win on this amazing poet.. years ago we had a contest on Neruda and it was a fantastic journey to research him.. now u have captured in these brilliant words..
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in Constance's "The Passionate Reader" contest Nette. Love, Carol"
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:00 PM
Hey, Nette. Did you know this just won in Constance's contest? BIg congratulations to you. You picked a lovely exerpt of that poet Pabo Neruda to emulate.
Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 10:35 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is a fine write Nette
Scholtz Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 4:34 AM
lovely, Congratulations on your win Nette. Elizabeth
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 8:51 PM
Wonderful love poem, Nette. Congrats on the super win! Are you giving this one to anybody special??
Stanley Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 5:05 PM
Very nicely done, a big congratulations on your win, Greg
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January 20, 2012 at 12:57 PM
Awesome write,Nette.Congrats on your win...
Brown Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette. Love, Carol
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January 20, 2012 at 11:38 AM
An amazing write from you Nette.Congrats on your big win.Visit my page:)
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January 20, 2012 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. A lovely valentine !!!
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January 20, 2012 at 9:53 AM
This Valentine write is very bright, enjoyed. Congratulation on your superb win, bl
Sweetheart Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 9:45 AM
congrats Nette luv on a superb win for this emotional and love charged poetry entry.. I am lost in these words.. soooooo romantic...
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November 23, 2011 at 9:26 PM
Nette, will you ever fail in dazzling me? Do you never just flop? Miss you and thinking of you, especially now that I've picked up a sword and brandish it feebily. I should have done more earlier. 'nough said. About this poem, how could it not win first place? It has left me teary and restless and feeling like that "consonant'... well done.... you are the genuine article...
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November 22, 2011 at 5:37 PM
FANTASTIC Nette :) I miss you girl...where have you been hiding :) Love, Natalie
Song Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 4:40 PM
There is so much emotional dedication to your Pablo, Nette. I can feel your oneness bleeding through this poem...outstanding...tearjerker....one of your best lately...(in my humble opinion). Luv, Gwendolen
Poet Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 9:26 PM
An amazing write Nette!Another gem from you.A top charter here.Best wishes.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 8:16 PM
an impressive write Nette luv..good luck in the contest.. still nursing my hand ..now have a steel plated cast on it to fuse nerves back and carpel tunnel too.. good luck in contest ..a magnifico one..
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November 21, 2011 at 3:11 PM
* "A Love That Reaches Into The Deepest of Ones Soul * Wherein Every Breath Breathes The One They Love * Deep Sea Diving Into The Deepest of Their Being * A Sudden Chill Amid A Warm Summers Day * All You Can Think of, Is How Much You Love Them * And Ow How You Love Them * Very Beautiful Poem * Dear Beautiful Nette * My Luv Always * Sarah." *
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November 21, 2011 at 11:39 AM
This is really very lovely, dear nette. Have a sweet day
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November 21, 2011 at 7:11 AM
This wonderful write is an excellent tribute to the great Neruda..enjoyed it every bit and much more, nette, hugs, jag
Lane Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 5:59 AM
As always Nette, beautifully done. Tony
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November 21, 2011 at 5:41 AM
Absolutly a beautiful write.. lovely flow.. hug right back to you...luv Michael
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