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Here I Love You

in my foolish quest for scrambled words, your inspiration becomes a heady sensation carrying me gently from the troubled traffic of my desecrated hours, as if i were entering under the skins of our candle lights: bringing me to embers of moments terribly free, like you.. and there, we become weightless on our open map---the meridians and continents passing through the mists of time and space, oh how my lips and this my striped soul adore you: wandering effortlessly on the terraces of our own love, war and peace. ~ often, at daytime, at night call when stars seem to cover their cherubic faces and i feel the throb of my faltering heart, your company i embrace, telling me how to live...as our sheets grasp in surrender; my tender moans start to bleed... then i become one with your skin, bones, and hands: through sips of wine and tea, i have to say today and after: ~” Here I love you and the horizon hides you in vain. I love you still among these cold things…” ~ i feel i am everywhere; i think of how many i can be with our candles and songs. ........ *excepts from Pablo Neruda’s “ Here I Love You” * please allow use of small caps ........ .. ......... Poem for Frank H.'s Best Contest by nette onclaud

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Date: 2/25/2012 7:33:00 AM
congrats Nette luv on a magnificent write and first place win on this amazing poet.. years ago we had a contest on Neruda and it was a fantastic journey to research him.. now u have captured in these brilliant words..
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Date: 2/25/2012 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in Constance's "The Passionate Reader" contest Nette. Love, Carol"
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:00:00 PM
Hey, Nette. Did you know this just won in Constance's contest? BIg congratulations to you. You picked a lovely exerpt of that poet Pabo Neruda to emulate.
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is a fine write Nette
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Date: 1/21/2012 4:34:00 AM
lovely, Congratulations on your win Nette. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/20/2012 8:51:00 PM
Wonderful love poem, Nette. Congrats on the super win! Are you giving this one to anybody special??
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Date: 1/20/2012 5:05:00 PM
Very nicely done, a big congratulations on your win, Greg
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Date: 1/20/2012 12:57:00 PM
Awesome write,Nette.Congrats on your win...
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Date: 1/20/2012 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2012 11:38:00 AM
An amazing write from you Nette.Congrats on your big win.Visit my page:)
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Date: 1/20/2012 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. A lovely valentine !!!
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Date: 1/20/2012 9:53:00 AM
This Valentine write is very bright, enjoyed. Congratulation on your superb win, bl
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Date: 1/20/2012 9:45:00 AM
congrats Nette luv on a superb win for this emotional and love charged poetry entry.. I am lost in these words.. soooooo romantic...
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Date: 11/23/2011 9:26:00 PM
Nette, will you ever fail in dazzling me? Do you never just flop? Miss you and thinking of you, especially now that I've picked up a sword and brandish it feebily. I should have done more earlier. 'nough said. About this poem, how could it not win first place? It has left me teary and restless and feeling like that "consonant'... well done.... you are the genuine article...
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Date: 11/22/2011 5:37:00 PM
FANTASTIC Nette :) I miss you girl...where have you been hiding :) Love, Natalie
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Date: 11/22/2011 4:40:00 PM
There is so much emotional dedication to your Pablo, Nette. I can feel your oneness bleeding through this poem...outstanding...tearjerker....one of your best lately...(in my humble opinion). Luv, Gwendolen
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Date: 11/21/2011 9:26:00 PM
An amazing write Nette!Another gem from you.A top charter here.Best wishes.
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Date: 11/21/2011 8:16:00 PM
an impressive write Nette luv..good luck in the contest.. still nursing my hand ..now have a steel plated cast on it to fuse nerves back and carpel tunnel too.. good luck in contest ..a magnifico one..
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Date: 11/21/2011 3:11:00 PM
* "A Love That Reaches Into The Deepest of Ones Soul * Wherein Every Breath Breathes The One They Love * Deep Sea Diving Into The Deepest of Their Being * A Sudden Chill Amid A Warm Summers Day * All You Can Think of, Is How Much You Love Them * And Ow How You Love Them * Very Beautiful Poem * Dear Beautiful Nette * My Luv Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/21/2011 11:39:00 AM
This is really very lovely, dear nette. Have a sweet day
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Date: 11/21/2011 7:11:00 AM
This wonderful write is an excellent tribute to the great Neruda..enjoyed it every bit and much more, nette, hugs, jag
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:59:00 AM
As always Nette, beautifully done. Tony
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:41:00 AM
Absolutly a beautiful write.. lovely flow.. hug right back to you...luv Michael
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