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Here I Await

[heptapent sonnet] The Sun has been off, hiding, where its warmth is far from here, its lustrous fingers stroking other planes. And I, abandoned to the winter's ruthless time of year, exist in hope that somewhere spring remains. The wind will blunt the spirit like a whittler dulls a knife. The darkened days will bleed intention dry. It seems that surely all the world stands, tremulous and rife with creeping cold, as icy snowflakes fly. I long for gentle summer days, where bluebirds light and sing from flowering trees where blossoms flutter down; to dance with fireflies in sacred starlight, worshiping the moonbeams, dressing me with lucent crown. Here I await, with cherished hope that summer's melody will loose the arms of winter's will that binds the joy in me.

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Date: 6/17/2023 12:50:00 PM
Add me to the above...oh, sorry, to your admirers below. I enjoyed this piece very much. Reading the responses from these twenty two respondents was even more enriching. Congratulations Kathrine.
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Date: 5/17/2023 7:59:00 PM
when the poet's lines can fire within longings long lost to eons of separations....and rush from memory the shared wishes....the quill can rest in a job well executed....
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Date: 5/16/2023 10:20:00 AM
Gorgeous sonnet!!
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Date: 4/30/2023 1:29:00 PM
Beautiful, amazing writing! Love your details too!
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Date: 4/26/2023 10:56:00 AM
Your words are beautifully woven, Katharine. Congrats on POTW and becoming a Lifetime Member.
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Date: 4/25/2023 9:13:00 AM
The darkened days will bleed intention dry. I loved this line, dark days does shadow our ambitions just as darkness intends do do. I loved it.
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Date: 4/25/2023 6:12:00 AM
I enjoy your wonderful way you weave your words into unexpected delight.
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Date: 5/27/2022 4:36:00 PM
Brilliant poem in both structure and content!
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Date: 5/20/2022 11:02:00 PM
A beautifully written sonnet Katherine and well deserving of POTW, congratulations. Tom
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Date: 5/19/2022 4:54:00 AM
I give this a WOW.....a double WOW....and a true Boston....WICKED AWESOME!!! This flows so smoothly it seems to call the gentle breezes of spring to heel. Wonderfully don Katharine
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Date: 5/17/2022 2:47:00 PM
what a delightful sonnet Katherine, many congrats on poem of the week:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/16/2022 7:18:00 PM
This is a gorgeous, well-crafted sonnet, Katharine. I enjoyed it very much. Congratulations on your P.O.T.W.
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Date: 5/16/2022 5:55:00 PM
A wonderful heptapent sonnet Katherine, beautiful lines. Congratulations on poem of the week… Belle
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Date: 5/16/2022 9:25:00 AM
John Watt told me to check this one out. I see how it got POTW. Amazing poetry, Katharine. From the looks of it, i take it that this type of sonnet alternates lines having more syllables with the regular sonnet lines. Beautiful imagery and so true to how i also feel about winter vs. summer.
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Date: 5/16/2022 6:42:00 AM
A lovely poem. Congratulations on your POTW.
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Date: 5/15/2022 9:21:00 PM
Katharine, I appreciate the care you put into crafting this sonnet; flow, rhymes, and imagery are all exquisite. I had not heard of this sonnet style before, so thank you for the introduction. I love the classic poetry feel of this and my favorite lines are "The wind will blunt the spirit like a whittler dulls a knife" and "the moonlight, dressing me with lucent crown". Beautifully written, a Fav for me, and big congrats for poem of the week acknowledgement ~ John
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Date: 5/15/2022 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful potw honor. Very lovely! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/15/2022 7:14:00 PM
Winter has a way of placing heaviness upon on the heart, with those cold and dreary moments. Like you, the warmth of summer is welcomed indeed. Your thoughts curls gently around me. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Katharine, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Wrap a little sunshine around you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/15/2022 4:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your honour of POTW with this lovely sonnet. Your feelings awaiting for Spring are expressed using stunning imageries. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 5/15/2022 9:53:00 AM
Katharine, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 5/15/2022 9:03:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet. Katharine. It's a poem that validates many of the feelings many of us feel waiting for the return of spring and summer. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. Congratulations on your POTW honor. I'll have to visit you other poems soon. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 5/15/2022 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. Your "Here I Await" is a lovely Sonnet write. Have a blessed day/week.................
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Date: 5/10/2022 4:45:00 PM
Katherine, you have penned a gorgeous sonnet! I absolutely love the metaphors of a hovering winter that never seems to let up, and how you set the mood with your imagery…this one is a fave for me! Excellent! :)
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Katharine L. Sparrow
Date: 5/10/2022 5:50:00 PM
Thank-you so very much!

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