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My hubby's name is David, so in our house he becomes 'Santa Dave' since he works so hard to make the season special for all of us! 

Here Comes Santa-Dave

Here comes Santa-Dave, here comes Santa-Dave
Decorating our front door
Poinsettias dressed in garland yards
Red and green galore
White lights shining through holly clusters
A sprinkling of Yuletide luster
Our front porch, a holiday card!

Here comes Santa-Dave, here comes Santa-Dave
Putting up the tree
Silver tinsel draped ornaments
In festive finery
Heirloom angel in cloth and lace
Lending us tradition's grace
Glittering in merry vestments

Santa-Dave knows what we crave
Rumballs and gingerbread his Christmas art
Baked in sugary snowflake surprises
And growing his wife's grinchy heart...
By three sizes

12/9/19

For Writing Challenge- December, 2019 - I Want Christmas Poems

Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode
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Watt Avatar
January 3, 2022 at 5:16 PM
Very delightful to read of your obvious affection for your husband. His Christmas talents are clearly worthy of celebrating in poetry. It's hard to believe you have a grinchy heart, but I loved the Dr. Seuss reference and the admiration you have for David. I particularly enjoyed "Our front porch, a holiday card!" as well as your creative rhyme scheme on the first two stanzas. Thanks for recommending this!
Delaney Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 8:14 PM
How sweet. I know you will have a very Merry Christmas and thank you for the gift of your poetry. Cheers, SuZ
Laurie Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 6:33 PM
G'day Michelle … I enjoyed everything about your poem with the topic, rhyme, and Christmas theme - Merry Christmas Michelle - Lindsay
La France Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 8:11 AM
Michelle congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem.
Faulkner Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 10:33 PM
Thank you for the placement in your contest!
Neumann Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 5:03 AM
You have 'got yourself' a good husband there. Happy Season's Greetings, Kai
Faulkner Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 10:33 PM
Thank you, Kai!
Adams Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 9:07 PM
i love this...i was actually singing along, one could see this through your vivid descriptions... nicely penned and an enjoyable read :) hugs best wishes in the contest!
Faulkner Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Glad you liked it, Sandra-
Kiser Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 3:40 PM
You can't complain about Santa Dave; he's got talent!
Faulkner Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 8:53 PM
He is Santa Superman!
Rose  Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 1:44 PM
what a fun jolly song to sing, please send me some of your gingerbread xo
Faulkner Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 8:51 PM
Thank you - he makes it from scratch, and it is yummy!
Wolf Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 5:05 PM
Oh, I'm sure that you don't have a 'grinchy heart!' Here's to you and Santa-Dave! Merry Xmas! :) gw
Faulkner Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 8:49 PM
Oh, sometimes I do! Thanks for your visit and comment, gw!
Foster Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 4:01 PM
Wonderful fun. Ann
Faulkner Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 3:39 PM
Appreciate it, Ann, thank you-
Leffanta Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 3:26 PM
Nice to know you married well! Enjoy the holidays - and your husband! Aloha! Rico
Faulkner Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 3:39 PM
Thanks, Rico - I will!
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