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Here and There

I would like to be there but always seem to be here, never quite making the last train as it pulls out of the station, not getting the invite, being somewhere else and without the entry fee. On clear days I can almost see across the wide expanse to there, beckoning with its brightness. Sometimes I'm sure it's nothing more than a mirage, a shimmering deceit, playing in the distances that stretch from here to the other side of me.

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Date: 4/3/2023 3:26:00 AM
Ahh I get on the train or get the invite then find it's not there either. I'm sure I've explored similar in one of my poems. Mine was the idea of just existing briefly and being unable to fathom why I can't always turn up. Like a movie running in my head of the days I was totally present and seen followed by me not truly turning up again. Haha sorry if my comments are now a chore
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/3/2023 6:49:00 AM
Not a chore at all, seize boldness, you have nothing to fear. I am often gripped by cancelled flights of the mind, stuck here when I have purchased a ticket to thrre, wherever that is.
Date: 10/31/2022 6:12:00 PM
I like this poem, Paul. I wonder if there aren't a lot of people who feel this way. I can truly say I do not have wistful thoughts of being somewhere else, but I know I did when I was younger.
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/1/2022 3:37:00 PM
Thanks for yr comments Jeff. Ptobably refers to a psychological undercurrent of a desire for change, the same generalised need that drives exploration, to experience the new, mental landscapes etc In a way, poetry is a place of elsewhere offering a brief escape into or away from ourselves or where we normally reside. Always appreciate your insights. Regards

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