Her Wonderland

Early rain falls gently like his fingers running softly through her tousled hair The wind breathes lightly like his lips treading velvets on her cheek,along her neck and across her peach-creamed skin so fair She dances,she sings by the cabin down the valley She feeds little birds and keeps on humming merrily Pansies sway in silence as she walks down the lane She strolls over the bridge then cross it back again She watches the Tuscan sun set down beyond the prarie She lays in verdant fields and dreams of the lost fairy With noisette eyes so full of love She follows fluttering wings of tiny fire-flies which glisten in night sky like little lantern lights Through fragrant vine-yards She runs and tastes blushed-scents of wine She journeys through distance through moments,n memory of time She holds on to a star to the edge of glowing moons She reaches the oasis beyond the desert dunes She reaches to the dark woods to the still sound of his cry She let hm see her magic where freedom's kite soar high She enters in the universe of his thoughts soft 'tender part to the cascading passion in the alley of his heart
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Date: 5/15/2015 6:32:00 AM
truly very beautiful pen charmaine i pray you had a wonderful birthday sorry not been around much wishing you a blessed weekend pal
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Date: 5/9/2015 8:48:00 AM
Beauty drips from every line of this delightful poem, Charm! I can feel mellow romantic tenderness mirrored in its dreamy imagery. #7 // I hope yours was a lovely and happy birthday. All the best. // paul
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Date: 5/4/2015 7:13:00 AM
Belated happy birthday Charmaine! Jack just came out with a birthday tribute for you. :) Kim
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Date: 5/4/2015 4:54:00 AM
'to the cascading passion in the alley of his heart'...WOW Charma, another gem from 'The Queen of Romance'--- Thank you for getting my day off to a good start! - Tim
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Date: 5/3/2015 10:42:00 AM
A Happy Belated Birthday Charma ;) hope you had an amazing day! Awesome write here as well, I enjoyed every line xxx
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Date: 5/3/2015 9:32:00 AM
This is a very touching poem filled to overflowing with love. Emile.
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Date: 5/2/2015 4:13:00 PM
enchanting piece, charms... you got me.. well done!.. huggs
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/2/2015 4:15:00 PM
and a happy birthday to you!
Date: 5/2/2015 1:13:00 AM
Stunning!
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Date: 5/1/2015 2:25:00 PM
My sweet Charmaine... lovely! Big smackers, Jack xxx
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/2/2015 9:12:00 AM
Thanks so much Santa!!!
Date: 5/1/2015 2:22:00 PM
Wonderful, and Happy Birthday
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/2/2015 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much sweet lady
Date: 5/1/2015 2:04:00 PM
This feels like a fairy tale, I loved it. A little bird told me it was your Birthday yesteday. HappyBelated Birthday to a lovely young woman.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/2/2015 9:14:00 AM
Thanks so much for the greetings
Date: 5/1/2015 8:57:00 AM
Sweet and beautiful, indeed. I did enjoy this one.
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Date: 4/30/2015 3:21:00 PM
Beautiful!!! Love SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2015 9:32:00 AM
Charmaine, so lovely, I love the phrasing of words, magical and flowing, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, a day. . . what is it about chocolate at 3pm, lol
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Date: 4/30/2015 12:45:00 AM
Pretty words!
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Date: 4/29/2015 11:39:00 PM
Beautiful. All the other words will just be in support of what your poetry is, Charmaine. Kim :) :)
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Date: 4/29/2015 3:49:00 PM
I agree with the comment below. Absolutely beautiful! Great job!
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Date: 4/29/2015 11:52:00 AM
Simply beautiful. Any man would love to be in the ally of your heart...I love the peach skin, the fire flies, the oasis...I love everything about this...definitely one of my favourites of yours....a 7 SB.....hugs Tim
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