Her Teeth

Her teeth are like stars They always come out at night A striking appearance change Removed to afford Comfort and a restful sleep Clean as a whistle next day

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 9/10/2017 9:23:00 PM

Lol, love the humor in your poems Pat!~Che :)

Pat Adams
Date: 9/11/2017 8:51:00 AM

Thanks Che!!! This poetry thing has become quite addicting at this point, I don't really feel like a poet though, more like just a rhymer or something.....80].....Pat

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 9/10/2017 4:34:00 PM

THAT is so funny!

Pat Adams
Date: 9/10/2017 6:53:00 PM

Thanks Dale, I appreciate that!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/10/2017 2:13:00 PM

Ha ha ha great humour Pat:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 9/10/2017 6:53:00 PM

Thanks Jan. That's my 1st Sedoka !!