Her Song

My butterflies began to smile again.

They felt the breadth of her octaves
Caress my scarring tissue

Please forgive me.
Please
Forgive me

I lost myself.

It was the first time in many weeks
That my heart smiled
With such enamored caution

I ached to slow dance with her apologies,
As she sang to me
With her hazel renditions
Unspoken

Our teardrops buckled 
Under the weight
Of silenced reflection

I thought I could make it through tomorrow
By removing you from my yesterdays
But, today, I now see I was wrong

She quietly cried upon my tattered arms
Pressing her moistened sadness
Against my elastic grin

“Tomorrow can be for us again.”

It was then
The stars outside my bedroom window
Faded towards reality’s sunrise

Was this dream
All that it seemed

©D.J.E.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Zahid Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 12:25 PM
Very well penned.. Stay blessed
Chircop Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 4:04 AM
Love your Pseudo Name ...??.It s so lovely to read you again,even if there wasn't your avatar,I would know it's you..Your poetry has your own signature. It's been long since I've been here..but I'm glad ..and so awesome on my return to find such a gem.
Tacito Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 6:14 AM
OMG I'M SO HAPPY YOU'RE OK, CHARMAINE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes, new poet name to start anew...thank you so much! Very relieved you're ok!
Goff Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 12:01 AM
Delightful renditions of loves emotional entanglements, Drake...always enjoy your rides...jimbo
Onclaud Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 5:23 PM
drake! cinematic play of a langiid setting.. wow factor for me.. where have you been?... hope all s well.. huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Wishing you well with your second book.
Tacito Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Thank you so much, Richard!!!
Leiser Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 10:09 PM
Such a profound poetic write that really made me think. Your pen is excellent, Drake! Enjoyed :)
Tacito Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Happy to trigger the thought...I appreciate it very much, Laura. Cheers!
Manassian Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 3:15 PM
Sweet sweet sweet sweet...Drake style. Happy it had a sweet ending. Good to read you again.
Tacito Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Thank you, thank you dear Eileen. Good to see you here also.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 8:07 AM
So good to see you back writing. You haven’t lost your touch!
Tacito Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:47 AM
Oh, I've been writing a lot! But, I've posted very little on here as I'm working on a 2nd book. :) As always, I'm very grateful, dear Richard!
Nicole Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 1:47 PM
Words are a reflection of love, of moments caressing a dream. Perhaps- the truth that circles reality. Your thoughts are tender, beautiful and they hold so many emotions. I am wrapping them gently around me. ~ Brandy
Tacito Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:47 AM
Thank you kindly, Brandy. I'm very grateful for you taking the time to get to know me a tad.
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