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In the burlesque hall she takes center stage; as the audience seeds their applause with wolf-whistles and jeers. Behind feathered fans she starts her striptease; utilizing moves rumored so nimble, no man could resist. Amidst moans and sighs all eyes follow her sexy gyrations; clamoring for more erotic reveals. In this fugue-like state, barely cognizant of her surroundings; she stokes libidos with her slow-burn dance. And stripping away all but her tan line; her inviting smile places men in an hypnotic-lust trance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/15/2018 7:43:00 PM
Well penned, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/14/2017 8:09:00 AM
It truly is an art form, well expressed Emile.
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Date: 3/14/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard, your encouraging comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.

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