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They had fought.  He left without a word while she was sleeping. She threw on the gown she had worn for him the night before,  pushed off the china vase and blooms he had given her. She listened to it crash to the floor and sat on the window sill  where the bouquet and container had been.  She was alone but at least she was the only flower.

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Date: 9/11/2014 6:45:00 PM
Proud girl, just watch out for broken glass. good write my friend.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 6:55:00 PM
i know you wouldn't put up with any crap. i write with women like you in mind.
Date: 9/11/2014 4:27:00 PM
Yup sounds like prom night for a good girl! How about She Just Said No ? Light & Love
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 5:48:00 PM
nice to see you here. thank you.
Date: 9/11/2014 3:32:00 PM
"Great poem, love your point of view here, we owe it to ourselves. But, on the other hand, it is not hidden here." :) LINDA
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 5:49:00 PM
i will find it.
Date: 9/11/2014 3:06:00 PM
I see....the only perfect flower in the room..well done
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 5:49:00 PM
thank you Tim.
Date: 9/11/2014 3:05:00 PM
Well done, Maurice...high class lady.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 5:50:00 PM
most women are. i am a huge fan.
Date: 9/11/2014 2:30:00 PM
oh how sad Maurice - I buy my own flowers wouldn't waste breaking the vase ...in fact I'd be more worried if he brought me flowers LOL. hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 2:42:00 PM
no it's a happy story. she gives him the finger by clearing the sill and then happy end to the story she is the only flower. flowers are important. flowers make us happy.
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