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Her Prerogative

They had fought.  He left without a word while she was sleeping. She threw on the gown she had worn for him the night before,  pushed off the china vase and blooms he had given her. She listened to it crash to the floor and sat on the window sill  where the bouquet and container had been.  She was alone but at least she was the only flower.
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Nance Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 6:45 PM
Proud girl, just watch out for broken glass. good write my friend.
Yvonne Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 6:55 PM
i know you wouldn't put up with any crap. i write with women like you in mind.
Guzzi Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 4:27 PM
Yup sounds like prom night for a good girl! How about She Just Said No ? Light & Love
Yvonne Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 5:48 PM
nice to see you here. thank you.
A   Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 3:32 PM
"Great poem, love your point of view here, we owe it to ourselves. But, on the other hand, it is not hidden here." :) LINDA
Yvonne Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 5:49 PM
i will find it.
Smith Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 3:06 PM
I see....the only perfect flower in the room..well done
Yvonne Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 5:49 PM
thank you Tim.
Gibson Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 3:05 PM
Well done, Maurice...high class lady.
Yvonne Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 5:50 PM
most women are. i am a huge fan.
Allison Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 2:30 PM
oh how sad Maurice - I buy my own flowers wouldn't waste breaking the vase ...in fact I'd be more worried if he brought me flowers LOL. hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 2:42 PM
no it's a happy story. she gives him the finger by clearing the sill and then happy end to the story she is the only flower. flowers are important. flowers make us happy.
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