James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Her Petite Impression

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               Modestly
      the indulger of write
             inch by inch
             with charge
      augments her veneer
 
               "supple
                  taut
              pink pixie 
                  flesh

              hern eyne 
        taunting me emerald
with long cinnamon wavy tresses"

          Upon the table
          his pen and slip
      conditionally reposed

           Upon the bed

     her petite impression 
          his galvanizing 
                  kiss

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John Loving Iii December 29, 2011 at 6:46 PM 6"2 vs the average. they are all petite. well maybe most of them depends on how your luck is. "galvanizing kiss"? sounds like a proposal to me and a commentment is warrented. so long freedom.

Charlotte Puddifoot December 14, 2011 at 6:28 PM "his galvanizing kiss" sounds electric, this petite poet enjoyed the write :-)

Poet Destroyer A December 7, 2011 at 12:26 AM wow! wow! wonderful~ENJOYED.. thank you for sharing your wonderful wow!!!;-) Have yourself a very lovely day, always,..p.d.

Daver Austin December 6, 2011 at 9:49 AM "Galvanizing!" Shazaam! Odds bodkins! Twenty two scidoo! Leapin lizards! I'm out of superlatives. What a stroke of genius. Love, daver

M.I.A . December 5, 2011 at 7:49 PM you made my heart fluttered!a beautiful poem James.

Sara Kendrick December 5, 2011 at 12:35 PM So romantic that you have written..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Yes, it took me a while to get to the writing of poetry..Sara

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2011 at 5:38 PM I like what Elizabeth called you here: a master of suggestion. She nailed it!

Night Prophet December 2, 2011 at 2:12 PM Wonderful image. A truly charming poem!

Sarah Seraphin December 2, 2011 at 1:11 PM * "AHHH, SOOO BEAUTIFUL THE IMPRESSIONS ONE FINDS * GALVANIZED * SHINY & BRIGHT LIKE A BRAND NEW DIME * LOVELY * MY. LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *