Her Petite Impression

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               Modestly
      the indulger of write
             inch by inch
             with charge
      augments her veneer
 
               "supple
                  taut
              pink pixie 
                  flesh

              hern eyne 
        taunting me emerald
with long cinnamon wavy tresses"

          Upon the table
          his pen and slip
      conditionally reposed

           Upon the bed

     her petite impression 
          his galvanizing 
                  kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/29/2011 6:46:00 PM
6"2 vs the average. they are all petite. well maybe most of them depends on how your luck is. "galvanizing kiss"? sounds like a proposal to me and a commentment is warrented. so long freedom.
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Date: 12/14/2011 6:28:00 PM
"his galvanizing kiss" sounds electric, this petite poet enjoyed the write :-)
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Date: 12/7/2011 12:26:00 AM
wow! wow! wonderful~ENJOYED.. thank you for sharing your wonderful wow!!!;-) Have yourself a very lovely day, always,..p.d.
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Date: 12/6/2011 9:49:00 AM
"Galvanizing!" Shazaam! Odds bodkins! Twenty two scidoo! Leapin lizards! I'm out of superlatives. What a stroke of genius. Love, daver
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Date: 12/5/2011 7:49:00 PM
you made my heart fluttered!a beautiful poem James.
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Date: 12/5/2011 12:35:00 PM
So romantic that you have written..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Yes, it took me a while to get to the writing of poetry..Sara
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Date: 12/4/2011 5:38:00 PM
I like what Elizabeth called you here: a master of suggestion. She nailed it!
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Date: 12/2/2011 2:12:00 PM
Wonderful image. A truly charming poem!
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Date: 12/2/2011 1:11:00 PM
* "AHHH, SOOO BEAUTIFUL THE IMPRESSIONS ONE FINDS * GALVANIZED * SHINY & BRIGHT LIKE A BRAND NEW DIME * LOVELY * MY. LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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