Her Past Formed Her Life

As a girl she always wanted to be loved
But no one ever showed her what it meant to be loved
She tried to be joyful and make others happy
But nothing ever changed her life was still crappy
One day she met someone that started admiring her
He started to show what love meant to her 
It was pleasant at first fun and gifts
Then something happened she felt like jumping off a cliff
He started doing things that didn't seem right
Every time she tried to stop she lost the fight
She thought she caused it she really didn't know
She didn't get why this man would act so low
She felt very guilty hid it in her heart deep
She forgot how to sleep all she did was weep
As her sadness grew the man finally started to see
He decided to leave and she was finally free
She started living her way started to forget the pain
But as she moved forward it was in her heart as stain
While she grew older she started going the wrong ways
Men did whatever in bed while she just lays
They came and went but never wanted her as a wife
Drugs boos and men became the definition of her life
Depressed she knew her life was going down the drain
Behind the doors she cried hard like rain
She envied the happy girls never would she have that luck
This was her life always she would be stuck
Her life turned upside down things started to go well
She met her first love she was finally out of hell
He was there all along she just didn't know
He finally revealed himself when he started to glow
I think you may know him
But may not have seen him
His name is.... God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 2/11/2016 10:52:00 AM
Julee, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA
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Date: 9/9/2012 1:06:00 PM
A heart and soul penciled so nicely. Love it!! Michael
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 9/10/2012 11:16:00 PM
Thank You:)
Date: 8/31/2012 12:59:00 PM
Nice write, Julee. This is the kind of writing I like most: straight from the heart. My very best to you. :)
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 8/31/2012 1:01:00 PM
Thank you:)
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