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Her Name was Chamomile

Her name was Chamomile..... she filled my heart ablaze, one lazy-October day, batting those eyes --- such guile! A poor, romantic little thing, hopeless to begging love, sick with gorgeous news --- her hero (would he flew) 'ere her aching heart, explode a thousand pleas for her sensuous sylph-self The men were dogs for her, back in the day; her hair smelled of Chamomile.... her eyes teased with Chamomile.... her lips, red and wanting, her crimson-spiced kiss.... But she be only mine, as she oozed down my throat....

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Date: 10/11/2014 8:13:00 PM
Are you writing about the tea flavor? I think that you did an impressive job with this work. I like it! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/3/2014 12:43:00 PM
Great write, loved the ending!!! Haven't seen you around, hope all is well!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 9/21/2014 9:57:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, been away for awhile; soon I'll be set up to join the Soup again; I've put up a new poem.... Always, Keith
Date: 8/27/2014 11:13:00 PM
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Date: 7/24/2014 4:45:00 PM
very clever ending keith most unexpected. Hugs jan x
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Date: 7/20/2014 10:35:00 PM
Excellent imagination but really not... I thought this was a real woman Keith... Enjoyed it to the very end... Verlena :0))s.
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Date: 7/16/2014 9:43:00 PM
I drink Chamomile every night so I can relate to this poem. Nice job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/16/2014 12:06:00 PM
This was sweet. I was enthralled. Lovely ending. You got me.
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Date: 7/16/2014 12:01:00 AM
Keith, your pen is magic in your hand!
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Date: 7/15/2014 5:25:00 PM
Chamomile Tea?..I am somewhat discombobulated..Enjoyed reading your unique and descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/15/2014 3:47:00 PM
oh now this is FUN. how you ended this poem. Very clever one. You are a tease with your Chamomile!
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Date: 7/15/2014 3:39:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this poem,and love the unexpected turn out..Charma
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