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Her Name Was Autumn

Thoughts of " Autumn " and her " off Spring" Seasons change as do people... Her name is Autumn... She quietly puts her mark the on Season …. Yet no one sees her there.. She has a certain presence, still … and her perfume fills the air.. Yet no one speaks to her… Her colors are not light, but bright… reds, yellows and orange, quite a sight… But even though , she’s more than that… No one approaches, some don’t seem to care.. So she quietly leaves ...before all the trees are bare...

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Patricia L Graham

Date: 10/22/2014 12:03:00 PM

Brought a smile. Autumns here in the UK are anything but quiet these windy days!

Kj Force
Date: 10/22/2014 12:51:00 PM

Patricia....Thank you so much for taking the time to visit and leave comment. Glad it brought a smile. Hopefully you will check out other writes by me both here @ poetrysoup and other sites on internet..Enjoy the Autumn season..kj

Diane Munsinger

Date: 11/13/2013 6:26:00 PM

How beautifully put! Great poetic quality-I had to read it not twice, but three times. Very enjoyable...Diane

Kj Force
Date: 11/13/2013 8:41:00 PM

diane..thank you for the compliment...so glad you enjoyed it and hope you will read my other writes...kj

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2013 9:44:00 AM

Ahhh!! I enjoyed the poetic quality of this awesome work..Sara

Kj Force
Date: 11/12/2013 12:00:00 PM

thank you for your comment Sara...glad you enjoyed..I will be checking out your writes also..kj

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/12/2013 4:39:00 AM

Great personification of the Autumn season. Nicely done.

Kj Force
Date: 11/12/2013 8:51:00 AM

thanks Jon and a good morning t'ya..glad you enjoyed, have a great day and get out there and partake of the beautiful Fall weather...