Her Name Is Vee

She blew my mind with her love
A love that I could only dream of.
She loved me unconditionally 
 That is the way love should be.
I will love you right or wrong, and your weaknesses
I’ll make strong, and I will do this not for me
If you face problems openly.
She took my hand and I felt the strength of her love
As bright and clear as the stars above.
This was the first time I experienced total bliss
As she held my face and kissed my lips.
What a strange power pure love can bring
It has a little bit of everything.
Who is this woman who calls herself VEE?
And has shown me how beautiful love can be.
She has made my heart feel so many things it
Has never felt before, and has opened up a brand new door.
This door has musical sounds of every instrument
That can be found, and it makes your heart drift away
To a different time and a different day.
What is the magical hold that she is making me feel?
Am I dreaming? Or is it real?
Never have I felt so at ease, that her every wish I want to please!
The tingling sensation that I feel inside
Is something that I cannot hide?
Who are you?    Is VEE your real name?
Yes!  My name is VEE and that is my real name!
However, I am a descendant of VENUS – goddess of love
Are you afraid? Or do you still want pure love?

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Date: 5/9/2014 5:18:00 AM
while I am new here what is rating box for, it goes 1-7, Is seven good or is 1 good
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Date: 5/9/2014 8:02:00 PM
I HAVE NOT SEEN A RATING BOX ON THIS SITE , BUT NORMALLY IT MAY GO FROM 1-10 WITH 10 BEING THE BEST. I ALSO THANK YOU FOR COMING TO MY PAGE AND ADDING YOUR COMMENT.
Date: 5/9/2014 5:16:00 AM
I love the planet venus its orbit taught us all when the earth needed us,
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Date: 5/8/2014 9:48:00 PM
Readable flow.
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Date: 5/9/2014 8:03:00 PM
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