Her Mystical Ideas Were Foreign

young of course
but strong
homeless sometimes
resilient always
she came to us on a Tuesday
walked up the hill carrying an old suitcase
full of her plays and poems
her ideas were magical.
they came at all kinds of times
while she was sleeping, vacuuming,
taking care of the children.
She was the most prolific writer
we had ever never known.
You could not get close to her
for her mystical ideas were foreign
and did not it into other’s schemata
but that did not prevent us from
being captivated or from loving her.

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Date: 12/20/2019 12:35:00 PM
Ah, where can I get her book?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2019 2:36:00 PM
She has not written THE book yet. But she is pondering it.
Date: 12/19/2019 2:29:00 PM
Enter and sign in please, mystery, mystical woman poet!! Methinks she's DISTANTLY related to you. Peace and Joy, Gershon
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/19/2019 8:50:00 PM
I am clutching my tummy. You nailed her!
Date: 12/19/2019 7:00:00 AM
Maybe foreign...but obviously mystical, for you loved her. Great story-poem! I have come to not expect less from you. Love it!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/19/2019 7:16:00 AM
Thank you very much Joe. If it is not fun for me, I stop.So far, I am having a blast with this "poetry" gig!
Date: 12/19/2019 1:57:00 AM
Very poignant muse, Caren! Excellent ink observations: You could not get close to her for her mystical ideas were foreign, and did not fit into other’s schemata. But that did not prevent us from being captivated or from loving her. Pure poetry in quill motion. Love and smiles and smiles of joy forever.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/19/2019 6:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Freddie!
Date: 12/19/2019 12:23:00 AM
Hard to embrace the things we are not familiar with, usually all the more reason for it. I would like to hear more about her, if you'd like to share :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/19/2019 1:27:00 AM
I am pondering this.....
Date: 12/18/2019 6:04:00 PM
This drew me in and made me want to ask... can she stay... can she tell us stories.. and love us every day... My mom was not one of those, so this lovely gypsy sounds so kind. Ann
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/19/2019 1:27:00 AM
I am so glad you recognize ourselves, Ann. Smile.
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