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Her Love Is Patient

Surfing a mind obstructed with Cupid's arrow was like bleeding a river that flowed upwards, towards an angry volcano having nightmares. A volatile internal rumble craving relief, only in eruption. Such was his fury with the thought of her very existence. Just as braving the flow of molten rock was like telling the Tide to stay high, so was he, Cupid's bow, on the run trampling on a pool of teardrops while craving an ocean to drown. A rage surpassing the passion of hate permeating that realm of throbbing pain caused by a guilt scourging his very being. As Cupid's poison in a delirious mind denoted, the only cure was the total deletion of the betrayed. To her, hate or any emotion was better than none. He could do no wrong, for it was Cupid with his poisoned arrow who shot her handsome dove. Their love was borne out of the belly of the earth, delivered by the demons of the underworld. She had tasted its fury and was scorched by its flames. Such, could not be touched by a misguided arrow. Betrayal was his but a mighty weapon she had. Forgiveness might be divine but her love was patient. He would be delivered from Cupid's poison only, by the very knowledge of her perpetual existence. T M Ioane.

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Date: 5/12/2014 6:47:00 PM
I enjoyed the writing. I was super great love,loss and forgiveness.
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 6/15/2014 8:37:00 AM
Dear Marla, was checking when i came across this comment and noticed that it is now so overdue Thanks for visiting and so glad you enjoyed it, yes life is all about love. loss and forgiveness. Sending warm Alofas from Samoa. Tiaua
Date: 3/21/2014 8:40:00 AM
Tiaua Such a heart wrenching and emotional write. A story of love and sacrifice full of sorrow and despair. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Toilet Crap poem.
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 3/23/2014 1:56:00 PM
Talofa Robin, my 'ancient'(my children called it) laptop is acting up again...I replied earlier but its not printed here!! By the way, I love your dropping by and leaving such a sincere comment. Yes, forgiveness and sacrifice is all part of a successful relationship.(thats just my opinion). Thanks again dear Robin.
Date: 3/10/2014 7:16:00 PM
Wonderful. I see why you appreciated "Thirteen Lines" now. We're both fans of imagism and a different kind of juxtaposition.
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 3/12/2014 2:34:00 AM
Thanks for your critique, I dont have much background in Poetry but I just love 'playing' with words and seeing imageries come to life. I will be looking out for your next piece dear Jeffrey. Alofas, Tiaua.
Date: 3/6/2014 8:34:00 AM
The beauty of this poem is of epic proportions, dear Tiaua! Please go back to my today's poem for I have issued an INVITATION to save the children! Thank you!
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 3/9/2014 12:59:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios, plse check out my latest poem, Hunger in Our Midst, hope it is of some help. I will keep in touch,thanks for dropping by dear friend. Tiaua.

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