Her Love Is

Her Love is illuminating this dark shadow casted over me
until it is penetrating the depths of my heart
If I could only be there to comfort her now
Instead the cause of her pain
Nights spent searching relentlessly
As the sun rises I'm still stuck to this page
As my mistakes taunt me
As I despair and bite my tongue
As the reality sets in that my heart is made of stone
I feel nothing, no emotion as pure as Love
In her eyes I'm not even human, I am a monster
A beast, yet she is more beastly than me
because her beauty rends me into pieces as a Lion
So much for the puppy sheltered in her loving arms
And what happened to the raindrops
that were Celestial whispers only months ago
Now the Heavenly Angels tears fall
Now the heavy burden returns and it's too much to bare
Now I hand it all over to God 
And silently I make mention of her in my prayers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/29/2013 6:54:00 PM
Hi "Little One"!! It's been a while...and it seems you've been away...You know that I'm always a fan. Your poem breaks my heart and I hope this is not your reality. Nevertheless, it speaks of very real human emotions we can all relate to. Great job as always! Soup Mail. x Annalise
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Date: 9/23/2013 1:31:00 PM
- Timothy, a very well conducted poem it is deeply and written with emotion....like it !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/20/2013 4:29:00 PM
Timothy, once again.. this is a nice dedicate poem... glad to be your friend... adding this one to my favorite poems... xox~ Linda
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Date: 9/20/2013 4:26:00 PM
it is so nice hearing from you...Where have you been.... I hope you are well.... and are back,... a deep poem.. and wow... usually it's beauty and the beast.. I like what you said.. I am a monster A beast, yet she is more beastly than me/\ awesome...Linda
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