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her light would reflect

Moon blooms like petals through a bulb, The skies within her break as glass. Most times she holds cup partway dark — Moon blooms like petals through a bulb, Only close, and open ~then some~ — The shadow of her going as Moon blooms like petals through a bulb The skies within her break as glass.

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Date: 7/8/2025 5:28:00 AM
- Lovely, enjoy reading your poem today Paige :) - hugs
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Date: 7/7/2025 8:33:00 PM
You write beautifully; this is mysterious and beautiful.
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Date: 7/7/2025 7:19:00 PM
A curious refrain that beckons more reads. I enjoyed, Paige!
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Date: 7/7/2025 9:05:00 AM
Lovely image of La Luna.
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Date: 7/7/2025 3:55:00 AM
Very very beautiful poetry!
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Date: 7/7/2025 2:22:00 AM
It has a lovely cadence to it, Paige. Just a quick question: Why both a swung dash and an em dash at the end of line 5? It feels a bit unnatural to me - not wrong, just ...
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Paige Hind
Date: 7/7/2025 5:26:00 PM
Okay. Never want to snub anyone! Hugs, Suzette. :)
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Suzette Richards
Date: 7/7/2025 7:08:00 AM
Oh, it is your poem and my opinion is just that; an option and not fact :)
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Paige Hind
Date: 7/7/2025 6:21:00 AM
I tried to erase it, but I just didn't like it. I hope you will not be angry at me if I keep it. :) Love, Paige - thanks again!!
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Paige Hind
Date: 7/7/2025 6:19:00 AM
I appreciate your opinion, Suzette, and thanks. :) I guess it will not make much difference if I erase it.
Date: 7/6/2025 6:14:00 PM
This is an exceptional and enjoyable poem, Paige! You convey an exquisite metaphor and a beautiful Triolet.
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