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Her Life As a Poem

She was big-boned. Her spirit a fine-spun sprouting of prairie brome threaded through moss and engine block. Her home was a pine and beatboard camp for wayward cats. She would discourse from her tangled porch where poems grew in small pots muddled with Ramen noodle and Maui Wowie. Her life often vacationed to a studio apartment on the east bank of her right eye. She wrote on the back of her mouth with cigarette smoke. Her poems were the rain-filled footprints, of Jack Kerouac. She had pronouns before and after her name. She wore a local fame, made legendary by the gaps in her thoughts, thoughts she shrewdly refused to fill in.

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Date: 3/6/2020 3:15:00 PM
Your textured and thought provoking imagery causes me to linger long over the fascinating finesse of your poem, Eric. Such a great last line to end an intriguing piece and a great first post as well! Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/6/2020 6:09:00 PM
Mi amigo, thank God, PS doesn't delete any poems from one's catalog.. I love going back and reading the earlier pieces of poet's I follow. I'll be reading more from your back pages, Eric. Have a nice weekend!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 3/6/2020 5:30:00 PM
Thanks so much for visiting my archive poems Susan. I write a lot, and All Poetry deletes poems after the list gets over a certain number, so I am glad this one has survived for now,and that you enjoyed it. It's always good to make poetry friends, and I am happy to be you amigo. Much obliged John.
Date: 9/22/2019 10:28:00 AM
A poem telling a lot of things but most of all, telling about her life as a poem. Take care.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 9/22/2019 10:33:00 AM
Many Thanks Tamanna!
Date: 8/12/2019 8:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. I like the easy familiarity of this piece.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 9/22/2019 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Richard!
Date: 7/24/2019 5:41:00 PM
....where poems grew in small pots....great image. Love your style a lot. SuZ
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/24/2019 6:00:00 PM
Thanks Suz, we poets are a strange breed.
Date: 7/12/2019 8:47:00 AM
Ha ha, I like it. What a great poem to introduce your quirky style. Welcome to the soup.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/12/2019 3:21:00 PM
Poetry comes easy to some, but getting it down on paper or print is the hard part. Here's to those who live their lives as poems! Thanks again, Richard.
Date: 7/6/2019 5:04:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem :)
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/12/2019 3:18:00 PM
Thank you, Charmaine. All the best.
Date: 6/22/2019 10:32:00 AM
Many thanks, Mo. I'm hoping that this does not need too much editing now.
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Date: 6/21/2019 8:25:00 AM
...And Welcome to Poetry Soup Eric! Mo
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Date: 6/20/2019 9:50:00 PM
I love this. A fave. :)
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