Her Heart Thaws

Her Heart Thaws


Ice crystals in her heart soon departed
as she met another very broken hearted
Gentle man destroyed by very dark witch
untrue to feed her gigantic greedy itch

Now bloody swords have been withdrawn
sun emerges, wind sings a sweet song
Old scars vanishing without a trace
smiles sprouting upon each happy face

Scales of justice now right old wrongs
joys spring forth in melodies and songs
Life rewards those that seek true love
with sweet blesses from the heaven above

Robert J. Lindley, 09-02-2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/14/2014 10:52:00 PM
Robert A very romantic and loving write. Yes, love can erase all the bad if we allow it into our lives and heart. Thank you for the awesome comment on my Poetry poem.
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Date: 9/4/2014 6:32:00 PM
A very enjoyable read. thank you.
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Date: 9/4/2014 2:48:00 PM
Very nice, my friend. Yes, true love can heal the old wounds and have us singing again. I believe that when we are ready to accept true love it will come and we will recognize it as the gift that it is. Very descriptive and heart warming, Robert. Greatly enjoyed it.... Robert.
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Date: 9/3/2014 7:24:00 PM
Oh, Robert, I wish I could write this sweet. So sweet, a wonderful trace, when all heals... Love Linda ... forever your fan... :)
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Date: 9/3/2014 7:53:00 AM
Life rewards those that seek true love , this is an amazing line to which I can relate well! Yet another Wonderful write Robert!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/3/2014 6:47:00 PM
Thanks my friend.. My wife rewards my patience and my joy in having her by my side. I am truly a lucky man!!
Date: 9/3/2014 7:52:00 AM
Did you make changes to this, Robert? I read it earlier and seem to feel some things are different. It is a beautiful peace. So glad when the old hurt can be forgotten with the newness of love. Hugs
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Date: 9/3/2014 6:46:00 PM
Yes, I edited it a bit. Keen eye you have my friend! Another mark of a poetic mind!!
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