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Her Forehead the Moon Premiere Contest Winner

The shoelaces untie, they've been caught by the kitten's eye. She touches, hesitantly, with her paw, the lace that rests long on the slope, raw, to the cool breeze of Mid-January; next to a window that reveals Her sanctuary. The sun dresses the top limbs of a tree; its lower bare curves are the hue of a cocktail skirt, with a ripped seam, that is halfway in the woven bamboo hamper; that was worn by the church- less Cantor.. and the pine needles that poke the evening.. they, in sun-light, had the tints of the moss that recline on the splashed, carved rocks of a Late Summer Shore. Now, within the room there is more... the clutter of a confident craziness on a wooden scratched glossiness, upon which belligerently rest, near the kitten's maw, the chewed 1% spandex blouse, and robicund bra- they are a tossed sunset over the edge..of Mayan Skies.. mountainous thrusts; Dusk's sleepy eyes. The books that have begun to be read, are upon the charcoal foam of her bed. This portrait is etched within the walls the hue of yellow skin, exhaustively painted again and again, and again.

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Date: 1/31/2021 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win/day with blessings...................
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Date: 1/30/2021 8:07:00 AM
Congrats from me too
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Date: 1/27/2021 6:42:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you...
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Date: 1/27/2021 6:10:00 PM
Congrats Jennifer on an excellent poem and Top Win....I loved it :)
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Date: 1/27/2021 5:10:00 PM
Jennifer, your poem is remarkably textured in original, layered meanings, with startling juxtaposed images. For example, "splashed carved rocks," "pine needles that poke the evening." My praise could never do justice to the richness of your poem. Truly a first place winner in a multitude of ways. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 1/27/2021 2:55:00 PM
wow! as soon as i read this i knew i was looking at a first place poem..fresh and original, unique phrasing and use of language..i'm jealous of this poem! congrats on your 1st place win in my contest :)
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