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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Her Favorite Shoes

Her Favorite Shoes

Tattered, cracked and worn,
Shoes waiting for adventure
Sing to tiny feet.

© Dane Smith-Johnsen
April 17, 2010

Copyright © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen | Year Posted 2010

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April 21, 2010 at 7:26 PM

What a interesting perspective. Nice use of personification in the last line. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 20, 2010 at 4:57 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Still Life Dane Ann. Love, Carol

April 19, 2010 at 2:36 PM

Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Raul's fine contest with this wonderful poem >> James,x

Barbara Gorelick

April 19, 2010 at 1:53 PM

Love those tiny feet..Congrats to you my dear. BG

Andrea Dietrich

April 19, 2010 at 12:49 PM

I really like this one, Dane. congrats for being in the winner's circle. soup mail

April 19, 2010 at 12:42 PM

DSJ, congratulations with your placement in my contest...Raul

Charmaine Chircop

April 17, 2010 at 11:46 PM

I love this one dear..Charma

April 17, 2010 at 8:19 PM

A fine Senryu and fine twist in the last line

Carrie Richards

April 17, 2010 at 6:58 PM

A nice one for that interesting photo challenge, Dane Ann! ~ Carrie

April 17, 2010 at 6:55 PM

Dane~ I really like this, seeing I don't have tiny feet lolo Good luck in the contest I think you'll do well! Love Ya Laura :)

April 17, 2010 at 6:44 PM

Really like this one:)

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