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Her Eyes Listen

Walking softly across room
skin the color of daisies
brown eyes listen intently
he waits for her smile.



Debbie Guzzi's "Walk Softly" contest

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Eileen Manassian

April 17, 2020 at 3:11 AM

How sweet to have someone who listens so intently. Blessings...

Richard Lamoureux

April 17, 2020 at 9:06 AM

;0) hugs Rick.

Danesh Morgan

September 8, 2013 at 9:55 PM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Richard Lamoureux

September 9, 2013 at 7:28 AM

Thanks so much Morgan.

Skat A

September 7, 2013 at 9:10 PM

Congrats Richard, in Debbie's awesome contest....... SKAT

Richard Lamoureux

September 8, 2013 at 8:09 AM

Thanks SKAT

Sandra Adams

September 7, 2013 at 8:05 PM

what a lovely poem...congrats on your win! Have a great weekend :)

Richard Lamoureux

September 8, 2013 at 8:10 AM

You as well Sandra

Debbie Guzzi

September 7, 2013 at 6:08 PM

Richard I wish I'd caught this for you before the judging, sorry, [daisies] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux

September 8, 2013 at 8:09 AM

Oops

Seren Roberts

September 7, 2013 at 3:36 PM

Lovely words Richard,congrats...Seren

Richard Lamoureux

September 8, 2013 at 8:09 AM

Thanks Seren.

Nette Onclaud

September 7, 2013 at 1:55 PM

how subtle with understones of a rendezvous... super congrats to you, rich!..:) huggs

Richard Lamoureux

September 7, 2013 at 2:25 PM

Thanks Nette.

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 7, 2013 at 5:46 AM

Congrats on the win

Richard Lamoureux

September 7, 2013 at 8:24 AM

Thanks Dr Ram

Poet Destroyer A

September 7, 2013 at 4:44 AM

Richard, a wonderful smooth win..linda

Richard Lamoureux

September 7, 2013 at 8:24 AM

Thanks Linda

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2013 at 11:12 PM

Richard I love yours and wish it had made in the top ten. Congrats to you. Love how it went beyond just the look of the geisha.

Richard Lamoureux

September 7, 2013 at 8:23 AM

Thanks Andrea, i was thinking perhaps I didn't fully understand what Debbie was looking for.

Richard Lamoureux

September 6, 2013 at 4:59 PM

Thanks Sara

Sara Kendrick

September 6, 2013 at 3:06 PM

Soft winning work..Congrats..Sara

Poet Tacito

August 27, 2013 at 8:13 AM

Subtle, yet filled w/desire & want. Ah, the build-up of something so valuable. Excellent.

Richard Lamoureux

August 27, 2013 at 11:41 AM

Thanks Drake. Have a great day.

Monterey Sirak

August 27, 2013 at 5:33 AM

Beautiful. With a few simple words you described the art and beauty of the geisha.

Richard Lamoureux

August 27, 2013 at 8:06 AM

Thanks Monterey, that was my hope.

Andrea Dietrich

August 26, 2013 at 5:31 PM

love that title too, the eyes listen. That is a good way to be!

Richard Lamoureux

August 26, 2013 at 6:06 PM

The Geisha were trained in the art of listening. Thanks for commenting.

Red Fiery

August 26, 2013 at 8:47 AM

Just came here to see your work...ur so gifted Richard..:)

Richard Lamoureux

August 26, 2013 at 8:52 AM

Thanks Red, you are kind.

Charmaine Chircop

August 26, 2013 at 7:53 AM

Ow gee..how soft and beautiful this is Richard!

Richard Lamoureux

August 26, 2013 at 8:52 AM

Thanks Charmaine.

Ravi Sathasivam

August 26, 2013 at 7:05 AM

Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Tfs

Richard Lamoureux

August 26, 2013 at 7:09 AM

Thanks Ravi

Eileen Manassian

August 26, 2013 at 6:42 AM

Good morning! :) Lovely piece!

Richard Lamoureux

August 26, 2013 at 6:46 AM

Thanks Eileen

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