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Her Eyes Listen

Walking softly across room skin the color of daisies brown eyes listen intently he waits for her smile. Debbie Guzzi's "Walk Softly" contest

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Date: 4/17/2020 3:11:00 AM
How sweet to have someone who listens so intently. Blessings...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/17/2020 9:06:00 AM
;0) hugs Rick.
Date: 9/8/2013 9:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2013 7:28:00 AM
Thanks so much Morgan.
Date: 9/7/2013 9:10:00 PM
Congrats Richard, in Debbie's awesome contest....... SKAT
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2013 8:09:00 AM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 9/7/2013 8:05:00 PM
what a lovely poem...congrats on your win! Have a great weekend :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2013 8:10:00 AM
You as well Sandra
Date: 9/7/2013 6:08:00 PM
Richard I wish I'd caught this for you before the judging, sorry, [daisies] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2013 8:09:00 AM
Oops
Date: 9/7/2013 3:36:00 PM
Lovely words Richard,congrats...Seren
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2013 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Seren.
Date: 9/7/2013 1:55:00 PM
how subtle with understones of a rendezvous... super congrats to you, rich!..:) huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2013 2:25:00 PM
Thanks Nette.
Date: 9/7/2013 5:46:00 AM
Congrats on the win
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2013 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Dr Ram
Date: 9/7/2013 4:44:00 AM
Richard, a wonderful smooth win..linda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2013 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Linda
Date: 9/6/2013 11:12:00 PM
Richard I love yours and wish it had made in the top ten. Congrats to you. Love how it went beyond just the look of the geisha.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2013 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, i was thinking perhaps I didn't fully understand what Debbie was looking for.
Date: 9/6/2013 4:59:00 PM
Thanks Sara
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Date: 9/6/2013 3:06:00 PM
Soft winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/27/2013 8:13:00 AM
Subtle, yet filled w/desire & want. Ah, the build-up of something so valuable. Excellent.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 11:41:00 AM
Thanks Drake. Have a great day.
Date: 8/27/2013 5:33:00 AM
Beautiful. With a few simple words you described the art and beauty of the geisha.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Monterey, that was my hope.
Date: 8/26/2013 5:31:00 PM
love that title too, the eyes listen. That is a good way to be!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/26/2013 6:06:00 PM
The Geisha were trained in the art of listening. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 8/26/2013 8:47:00 AM
Just came here to see your work...ur so gifted Richard..:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/26/2013 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Red, you are kind.
Date: 8/26/2013 7:53:00 AM
Ow gee..how soft and beautiful this is Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/26/2013 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine.
Date: 8/26/2013 7:05:00 AM
Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/26/2013 7:09:00 AM
Thanks Ravi
Date: 8/26/2013 6:42:00 AM
Good morning! :) Lovely piece!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/26/2013 6:46:00 AM
Thanks Eileen

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