James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Her Eyes

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Her eyes close as he enters

 her lips move as to speak
     but there is silence

         he withdraws

   her eyes quickly open
 as though her eyes could
             speak

   She instantly pleads

          he enters

   Her eyes gleaming
 she playfully retreats

       He implores
         he enters
       she screams

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Alley Poe May 16, 2009 at 4:08 PM you almost left me with unspoken words for thoughts just flooded in my mind and almost drowned me. sweet write... -Alley

Sharon Winter May 11, 2009 at 4:39 PM Whoa. This is sizzling. Yikes, was not expecting such an awesome hot write. Surprise! : ) Love, Shar

L'Nass Shango May 6, 2009 at 11:11 AM Deftly coy ... poetry like a vixen on a icy limb ... stretching for the sun ... love it!

Ali Matheny May 6, 2009 at 3:17 AM Nice Poem! Although it reminds me of my horrible past memory... Its very...Uniquely done sweetie! Love, Alexz James Peranteau June 3, 2021 at 1:18 AM I pray that your past has withered away, the derogatory uv them that is dear poet...the belated ty dear poet

Anna-Marie Docherty May 5, 2009 at 12:26 AM A captivating, hot read, that draws you in, feeling the passion involved and taking the imagination exactly where you intended...smiles James, another wonderful piece! Thanks for your welcome views/comments. Well done, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Donna Golden May 4, 2009 at 4:47 PM Suddenly it feels warmer in here. Very sensual write, James. I like that it's not overt, yet the meaning is clear and bold. Well done. <3 Donna

Charmaine Chircop May 3, 2009 at 12:21 PM passion to extent---nicely described----charma