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Her Eyes

. Her eyes close as he enters her lips move as to speak but there is silence he withdraws her eyes quickly open as though her eyes could speak She instantly pleads he enters Her eyes gleaming she playfully retreats He implores he enters she screams

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Alley Poe

Date: 5/16/2009 4:08:00 PM

you almost left me with unspoken words for thoughts just flooded in my mind and almost drowned me. sweet write... -Alley

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/11/2009 4:39:00 PM

Whoa. This is sizzling. Yikes, was not expecting such an awesome hot write. Surprise! : ) Love, Shar

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/6/2009 11:11:00 AM

Deftly coy ... poetry like a vixen on a icy limb ... stretching for the sun ... love it!

Ali Matheny

Date: 5/6/2009 3:17:00 AM

Nice Poem! Although it reminds me of my horrible past memory... Its very...Uniquely done sweetie! Love, Alexz

James Peranteau
Date: 6/3/2021 1:18:00 AM

I pray that your past has withered away, the derogatory uv them that is dear poet...the belated ty dear poet

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 5/5/2009 12:26:00 AM

A captivating, hot read, that draws you in, feeling the passion involved and taking the imagination exactly where you intended...smiles James, another wonderful piece! Thanks for your welcome views/comments. Well done, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Donna Golden

Date: 5/4/2009 4:47:00 PM

Suddenly it feels warmer in here. Very sensual write, James. I like that it's not overt, yet the meaning is clear and bold. Well done. <3 Donna

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/3/2009 12:21:00 PM

passion to extent---nicely described----charma