James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Her Distended Gifts

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            Then she bragged
               front mine self
 
           "these lips have yet
                been kissed"

              So forth came I 
               past those lips
                melting way
                  her fears

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Wilma Neels April 24, 2012 at 2:26 AM Who would not feel save when fears melt away.. Enjoyed your gem James, have not read you in a while.. Hope yourself and Noah are doing okay :) love Wilma

Gail Debole April 21, 2012 at 6:21 PM Hi James - Very nicely written. Like the style of the poem. Thank you for your kind comments about my poem. - Gail

Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2012 at 3:40 PM Lovely written James! - oxox Anne-Lise

Daver Austin April 18, 2012 at 11:17 AM Thanks for reading my stuff, Sir James. Each posting of your own work is a treat. Love, daver

Daver Austin April 16, 2012 at 9:12 AM A masterpiece of speculation. Methinks thee art up to no good. Love, daver

James Marshall Goff April 16, 2012 at 8:16 AM JP....I like the "Victorian" imagery here! cool touch! jimbo

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2012 at 7:09 PM I really like the last part of this, melting away her fears. Very nice!!

Nette Onclaud April 15, 2012 at 12:21 PM you pulled me in with this wondrous piece, james... love how you phrased your thoughts!... romance abounds!..:) huggs!