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Her Chair

hush now my daughter let lamplights crown your damp hair waiting for beaded prayers to bathe teary sky empty Mom's chair rocks no more… heaven sails with her pearled lips Choka Me, Dr. Ram Mehta

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/28/2014 1:11:00 AM
you leave me misty-eyed, franco... nostalically quilled.. cheers on your huge win.. huggs
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Date: 9/27/2014 9:21:00 PM
wow, what imagery to describe this sad scene. Beautiful and congrats for your win.
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Date: 9/27/2014 6:14:00 PM
My first read of your work and its outstanding. Congrats. BG
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Date: 9/27/2014 3:54:00 PM
very endearing, I can't wait to read more verse from you. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 9/27/2014 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this heart wrenching poem Franco.
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Date: 9/27/2014 10:05:00 AM
congratulations on your winning choka.
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:15:00 AM
A sad write, perfectly executed, touching. Congratulations on your first place win with this excellent choka.
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Date: 9/27/2014 6:56:00 AM
what an incredibly touching rocking chair CONGRATS. Dutch Greetings. Elly
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Date: 9/27/2014 6:27:00 AM
A touching piece! Congrats.
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Date: 9/27/2014 6:03:00 AM
Lovely, Franco. Congrats.
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Date: 9/27/2014 4:33:00 AM
Sweet moments to memory Franco, wonderful choka!congrats on top win!
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Date: 9/27/2014 2:24:00 AM
this has a real spiritual air to it many congrats on your fine win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/27/2014 1:52:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Franco
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Date: 9/25/2014 4:34:00 PM
Well done. You have captured a moment so poetically. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 9/25/2014 12:37:00 PM
ohh my, this choka is brilliantly done, how sad, franco... nice to see you visiting my page.. huggs
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