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Her Beauty Abounds


Captured by the lens 
Mirrored reflection echoes 
Her beauty abounds 
Stance of elegance lures me 
Beyond the glass, I desire 




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Iolanda Scripca

September 14, 2010 at 5:15 PM

Beautiful and intriguing admiration of her beauty. Congratulations, dear James, on you first place.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

September 14, 2010 at 8:28 AM

Hi James-- you definitely captured beauty succinctly with this tanka :) super belated congrats on your wonderful win :) -- nikko :)

Brandee Augustus

September 1, 2010 at 1:23 PM

Very nice!! I even enjoyed the little lines you put at the end. This is a very elegant piece! Congratulations on your first place win!

Carrie Richards

August 30, 2010 at 6:16 PM

So beautiful, James....magic in your lovely poem! Congratulations on a well deserved win!! Love, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

August 30, 2010 at 5:31 PM

Congratulations on winning first place, James! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 30, 2010 at 5:12 PM

Congratulations on your first placement, James

Sharon Tideswell

August 30, 2010 at 4:21 PM

Congratulations on your win James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 30, 2010 at 4:40 AM

Congratulations James on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol

De R

August 30, 2010 at 2:14 AM

Congrats on your big win, James. This is beyond beautiful, I can feel the desire for the person 'captured by the lens'. Kinda like immortal beauty, so sweet. Emily