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Her Beauty Abounds

Captured by the lens Mirrored reflection echoes Her beauty abounds Stance of elegance lures me Beyond the glass, I desire .

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Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/14/2010 5:15:00 PM

Beautiful and intriguing admiration of her beauty. Congratulations, dear James, on you first place.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/14/2010 8:28:00 AM

Hi James-- you definitely captured beauty succinctly with this tanka :) super belated congrats on your wonderful win :) -- nikko :)

Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/1/2010 1:23:00 PM

Very nice!! I even enjoyed the little lines you put at the end. This is a very elegant piece! Congratulations on your first place win!

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/30/2010 6:16:00 PM

So beautiful, James....magic in your lovely poem! Congratulations on a well deserved win!! Love, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/30/2010 5:31:00 PM

Congratulations on winning first place, James! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2010 5:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your first placement, James

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/30/2010 4:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 4:40:00 AM

Congratulations James on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol

De R

Date: 8/30/2010 2:14:00 AM

Congrats on your big win, James. This is beyond beautiful, I can feel the desire for the person 'captured by the lens'. Kinda like immortal beauty, so sweet. Emily

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/29/2010 8:19:00 PM

Congratulations James on a great tanka and great win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2010 7:20:00 PM

Congratulations again today, James. Way to go! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/29/2010 6:34:00 PM

Congrats James on your big first place win in the Tanka contest by Rick... elegant piece.. enjoy.. with luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/29/2010 6:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this beauty James :)

Kris Walters

Date: 8/6/2010 6:19:00 PM

Ah, lovely one this one!! Love that last line- wonderful :) Kris~

Date: 8/6/2010 5:41:00 PM

So much depth in this concise poem. I really like the last line. Keep on writing. Have a good weekend. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/6/2010 4:08:00 PM

Reads like a beautiful picture...Sara

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/6/2010 2:41:00 PM

Hi James, this is just lovely. I love the idea of the echoed reflection between mirror and lens. Last line is beautiful ~ Sharon

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/6/2010 1:05:00 PM

A creative genius at work once again.. Love it James, enjoy your weekend as well.. Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2010 9:38:00 AM

Very nice, James!

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/6/2010 8:10:00 AM

gorgeous as always, your poetry makes me melt James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/6/2010 7:01:00 AM

Wow! I love the reference to the camera view of this beauty. Excellent tanka, James. Best wishes in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/6/2010 6:30:00 AM

enjoyed reading today! If we could be the one in the photo...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/6/2010 5:46:00 AM

A very creative and wonderful picture