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Her Beauty Abounds

Captured by the lens Mirrored reflection echoes Her beauty abounds Stance of elegance lures me Beyond the glass, I desire .

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Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/14/2010 5:15:00 PM

Beautiful and intriguing admiration of her beauty. Congratulations, dear James, on you first place.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/14/2010 8:28:00 AM

Hi James-- you definitely captured beauty succinctly with this tanka :) super belated congrats on your wonderful win :) -- nikko :)

Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/1/2010 1:23:00 PM

Very nice!! I even enjoyed the little lines you put at the end. This is a very elegant piece! Congratulations on your first place win!

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/30/2010 6:16:00 PM

So beautiful, James....magic in your lovely poem! Congratulations on a well deserved win!! Love, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/30/2010 5:31:00 PM

Congratulations on winning first place, James! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2010 5:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your first placement, James

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/30/2010 4:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 4:40:00 AM

Congratulations James on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol

De R

Date: 8/30/2010 2:14:00 AM

Congrats on your big win, James. This is beyond beautiful, I can feel the desire for the person 'captured by the lens'. Kinda like immortal beauty, so sweet. Emily