James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Her Autumn Red Hair

Her Autumn red hair
Like leaves on the turn
A colour so 
Delightful auburn

A smile that turns
Heads in the room
An aura of cheer
Like a new spring bloom

This youngster she is
A breath of fresh air
When the young boys pass
They delightfully stare



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Carolyn Devonshire June 4, 2010 at 12:48 PM Wow, three poems succeeding in the first round of the Soup contest, James! Kudos to you, my friend. They're all winners in my eyes! Love, Carolyn

May 31, 2010 at 9:03 PM Congratulations on your first round win. Best wishes. Scarlett

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 31, 2010 at 9:09 AM Congrats James on all three entries making the first round of competition in the Poetry Soup contest.. way to go Highlander.. good luck my friend... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Brian Strand May 31, 2010 at 8:12 AM The poem and especially the title stand out James and make it a worthy Ist round winner.Rgds Brian

Anthony Nutter November 19, 2009 at 10:00 AM Excellent write, you have me looking over my shoulder for this attractive red head. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Jo Bien November 17, 2009 at 8:13 PM beautiful James..JB

Donna Golden November 13, 2009 at 1:45 PM Delightful is...this poem you've produced! Simply fantastic, and going into my favorites, James! You've got a new blog comment, btw. Hugs, Donna

Melody Coster November 12, 2009 at 5:52 PM Hi James, Melody here. I truly enjoyed this poem but was wondering about the last line "Delightful auburn". I was wondering if it should read Delightfully auburn. Just a thought but either way its still good. Melody?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 11, 2009 at 7:11 PM Soup Mail, James....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 11, 2009 at 6:05 AM James... Soup Mail

Charmaine Chircop November 10, 2009 at 9:30 PM Lovely Autumn girl...swaying in fresh air--Charma

John Freeman November 10, 2009 at 8:32 AM Sounds like a daughter that you don't want to grow up James, you have to let go man. Smile! Sincerely, Moses

Giselle Sun November 9, 2009 at 9:59 PM Truly remarkable as always!

John Loving Iii November 9, 2009 at 1:23 PM reminds me of some one i wrote about in my past. with auburn red hair. jhl

James Peranteau November 9, 2009 at 9:37 AM Smooth beautiful and quite the appropriate time to write this poem Mr. Fraser ! Awesome write ! james

Moonbee Canady November 9, 2009 at 9:07 AM Very Nice, symbolic description of Autumn, Highlander... It Reaches Out To The Feminine in all women ... MoonBee

Barbara Gorelick November 8, 2009 at 3:38 PM How truly lovely..now who is this lovely lady with the auburn tresses? BG

Elaine George November 8, 2009 at 1:10 PM You paint a very vibrant picture with your words. James Thank you for sharing, James and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Lainie

Sara Kendrick November 8, 2009 at 11:08 AM Auburn is a beautiful color and it seems like it is rare but blonde hair is even rare. Most of the time people with auburn hair have such fair skin as well. Nicely done Rhyme in tribute to someone special I guess. Keep writing. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire November 8, 2009 at 10:27 AM A lovely reflection on a young woman who obviously makes a great impression on young men. Delightful! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 8, 2009 at 7:29 AM Descriptive and delightful words and is she your little one? she is quite beautiful I imagine with such stunning imagery of her.. wonderful James as always..u share so much of u with us ... another masterpiece. enjoyed... everything I read today ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 8, 2009 at 5:19 AM James, This poem is delightful. It reminded me of my grandmother, and during her earlier years, my mother. They both loved and wore auburn hair. Thanks to ???"Clairol... Smiles, Dane Ann Soupmail

Iolanda Scripca November 8, 2009 at 3:28 AM I checked The Highlander, read your poem and admired the illustration. Beautiful combination, James. All the best, Iolanda

Marty Owens November 7, 2009 at 9:47 PM Beautiful poem..My first wife had auburn hair and this poem describes her...she died at age of 34 from a rare disease....Thanks for the memory...Marty