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Her Autumn Red Hair

Her Autumn red hair
Like leaves on the turn
A colour so 
Delightful auburn

A smile that turns
Heads in the room
An aura of cheer
Like a new spring bloom

This youngster she is
A breath of fresh air
When the young boys pass
They delightfully stare



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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2009

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Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/4/2010 12:48:00 PM Wow, three poems succeeding in the first round of the Soup contest, James! Kudos to you, my friend. They're all winners in my eyes! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Date: 5/31/2010 9:03:00 PM Congratulations on your first round win. Best wishes. Scarlett Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/31/2010 9:09:00 AM Congrats James on all three entries making the first round of competition in the Poetry Soup contest.. way to go Highlander.. good luck my friend... with luv from the "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 5/31/2010 8:12:00 AM The poem and especially the title stand out James and make it a worthy Ist round winner.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Anthony Nutter Date: 11/19/2009 10:00:00 AM Excellent write, you have me looking over my shoulder for this attractive red head. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit Login to Reply

Jo Bien Date: 11/17/2009 8:13:00 PM beautiful James..JB Login to Reply

Donna Golden Date: 11/13/2009 1:45:00 PM Delightful is...this poem you've produced! Simply fantastic, and going into my favorites, James! You've got a new blog comment, btw. Hugs, Donna Login to Reply

Melody Coster Date: 11/12/2009 5:52:00 PM Hi James, Melody here. I truly enjoyed this poem but was wondering about the last line "Delightful auburn". I was wondering if it should read Delightfully auburn. Just a thought but either way its still good. Melody? Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/11/2009 7:11:00 PM Soup Mail, James.... Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/11/2009 6:05:00 AM James... Soup Mail Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/10/2009 9:30:00 PM Lovely Autumn girl...swaying in fresh air--Charma Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 11/10/2009 8:32:00 AM Sounds like a daughter that you don't want to grow up James, you have to let go man. Smile! Sincerely, Moses Login to Reply

Giselle Sun Date: 11/9/2009 9:59:00 PM Truly remarkable as always! Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 11/9/2009 1:23:00 PM reminds me of some one i wrote about in my past. with auburn red hair. jhl Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 11/9/2009 9:37:00 AM Smooth beautiful and quite the appropriate time to write this poem Mr. Fraser ! Awesome write ! james Login to Reply

Moonbee Canady Date: 11/9/2009 9:07:00 AM Very Nice, symbolic description of Autumn, Highlander... It Reaches Out To The Feminine in all women ... MoonBee Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 11/8/2009 3:38:00 PM How truly lovely..now who is this lovely lady with the auburn tresses? BG Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 11/8/2009 1:10:00 PM You paint a very vibrant picture with your words. James Thank you for sharing, James and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Lainie Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/8/2009 11:08:00 AM Auburn is a beautiful color and it seems like it is rare but blonde hair is even rare. Most of the time people with auburn hair have such fair skin as well. Nicely done Rhyme in tribute to someone special I guess. Keep writing. Sara Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/8/2009 10:27:00 AM A lovely reflection on a young woman who obviously makes a great impression on young men. Delightful! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/8/2009 7:29:00 AM Descriptive and delightful words and is she your little one? she is quite beautiful I imagine with such stunning imagery of her.. wonderful James as always..u share so much of u with us ... another masterpiece. enjoyed... everything I read today ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 11/8/2009 5:19:00 AM James, This poem is delightful. It reminded me of my grandmother, and during her earlier years, my mother. They both loved and wore auburn hair. Thanks to ???"Clairol... Smiles, Dane Ann Soupmail Login to Reply

Iolanda Scripca Date: 11/8/2009 3:28:00 AM I checked The Highlander, read your poem and admired the illustration. Beautiful combination, James. All the best, Iolanda Login to Reply

Marty Owens Date: 11/7/2009 9:47:00 PM Beautiful poem..My first wife had auburn hair and this poem describes her...she died at age of 34 from a rare disease....Thanks for the memory...Marty Login to Reply