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Her Autumn Red Hair

Her Autumn red hair Like leaves on the turn A colour so Delightful auburn A smile that turns Heads in the room An aura of cheer Like a new spring bloom This youngster she is A breath of fresh air When the young boys pass They delightfully stare http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-5.php

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/4/2010 12:48:00 PM

Wow, three poems succeeding in the first round of the Soup contest, James! Kudos to you, my friend. They're all winners in my eyes! Love, Carolyn

Date: 5/31/2010 9:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your first round win. Best wishes. Scarlett

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2010 9:09:00 AM

Congrats James on all three entries making the first round of competition in the Poetry Soup contest.. way to go Highlander.. good luck my friend... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Brian Strand

Date: 5/31/2010 8:12:00 AM

The poem and especially the title stand out James and make it a worthy Ist round winner.Rgds Brian

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/19/2009 10:00:00 AM

Excellent write, you have me looking over my shoulder for this attractive red head. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Jo Bien

Date: 11/17/2009 8:13:00 PM

beautiful James..JB

Donna Golden

Date: 11/13/2009 1:45:00 PM

Delightful is...this poem you've produced! Simply fantastic, and going into my favorites, James! You've got a new blog comment, btw. Hugs, Donna

Melody Coster

Date: 11/12/2009 5:52:00 PM

Hi James, Melody here. I truly enjoyed this poem but was wondering about the last line "Delightful auburn". I was wondering if it should read Delightfully auburn. Just a thought but either way its still good. Melody?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/11/2009 7:11:00 PM

Soup Mail, James....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/11/2009 6:05:00 AM

James... Soup Mail

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/10/2009 9:30:00 PM

Lovely Autumn girl...swaying in fresh air--Charma

John Freeman

Date: 11/10/2009 8:32:00 AM

Sounds like a daughter that you don't want to grow up James, you have to let go man. Smile! Sincerely, Moses

Giselle Sun

Date: 11/9/2009 9:59:00 PM

Truly remarkable as always!

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/9/2009 1:23:00 PM

reminds me of some one i wrote about in my past. with auburn red hair. jhl

James Peranteau

Date: 11/9/2009 9:37:00 AM

Smooth beautiful and quite the appropriate time to write this poem Mr. Fraser ! Awesome write ! james

Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/9/2009 9:07:00 AM

Very Nice, symbolic description of Autumn, Highlander... It Reaches Out To The Feminine in all women ... MoonBee

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/8/2009 3:38:00 PM

How truly lovely..now who is this lovely lady with the auburn tresses? BG

Elaine George

Date: 11/8/2009 1:10:00 PM

You paint a very vibrant picture with your words. James Thank you for sharing, James and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/8/2009 11:08:00 AM

Auburn is a beautiful color and it seems like it is rare but blonde hair is even rare. Most of the time people with auburn hair have such fair skin as well. Nicely done Rhyme in tribute to someone special I guess. Keep writing. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2009 10:27:00 AM

A lovely reflection on a young woman who obviously makes a great impression on young men. Delightful! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/8/2009 7:29:00 AM

Descriptive and delightful words and is she your little one? she is quite beautiful I imagine with such stunning imagery of her.. wonderful James as always..u share so much of u with us ... another masterpiece. enjoyed... everything I read today ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/8/2009 5:19:00 AM

James, This poem is delightful. It reminded me of my grandmother, and during her earlier years, my mother. They both loved and wore auburn hair. Thanks to ???"Clairol... Smiles, Dane Ann Soupmail

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/8/2009 3:28:00 AM

I checked The Highlander, read your poem and admired the illustration. Beautiful combination, James. All the best, Iolanda

Marty Owens

Date: 11/7/2009 9:47:00 PM

Beautiful poem..My first wife had auburn hair and this poem describes her...she died at age of 34 from a rare disease....Thanks for the memory...Marty