Her Arms Are Open

Her arms are open  


Across the vast expanse
Heat patterns rise from flat rock
Simmering sensations to fool the mind
Blurring even the recognizable
Into a mirage of nothingness

“Dust coated winds that do not exist”

Blinding hypnotic colors play
Weaving patterns of self doubt
Alone in a misconception of belief
Solitude of unwanted fear
Emptiness worn on a sleeve

“Kaleidoscopic nightmares so very pretty”

Let down, shoved aside, forgotten
Discarded emotions piled in a heap
Broken sidewalks of those I thought I knew
French braided friends - or so I believed
Abandoned on my own crumbling foundation

“Why did I ever believe?”

When I see a tiny speck, (perhaps something in my eye)
Canceling the horizon’s verticality
Moving beyond invisible footprints
Solidifying a view - a smile, waving
As if a drunken crow has tipped over

“Thoughts turn to memories of words once spoken”

Reoccurring images race forward
Sentences of comfort find their way
Down the path to my heart
Realizing I now understand
What she meant - that day, this day

“I run to meet her halfway - her arms are open”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/27/2017 8:50:00 PM
So romantic Chris, you are such a great poet, a word master comes to mind. I especially love the last line, it makes up for all the doubts in the previous lines. A Super 7++ and a fav........ Maria
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Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 9:22:00 AM
I am so thrilled you enjoyed this one Maria. Your kind words are like open arms to me. :)
Date: 5/26/2017 5:00:00 PM
Meet me half way-Got me singing this song...and yours...Im sure She will be waiting.
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Date: 5/26/2017 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine. I am glad you are sure, because I'm not. :)
Date: 5/24/2017 1:26:00 PM
I felt like I was in a world of ideas thirsting for the next line to drink..I like this poem
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Chris Green
Date: 5/24/2017 2:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Frederic. I am glad you did.
Date: 5/24/2017 12:48:00 PM
No matter how wide the expanse, her arms are wider :) I do this too, I am away when I write, or whenever I want to, this reminds me so of it.... Go into her arms!
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Date: 5/24/2017 1:12:00 PM
It's cool isn't it, like taking a little mini poetic vacation. :) Thanks again Darren for leaving such kind words for me to find.
Date: 5/24/2017 11:54:00 AM
Wow ! What a powerful ending! I love this one Chris. :)
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Date: 5/24/2017 12:31:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi. I forgot to mention she also has coffee waiting on the porch. :) I appreciate you my friend.
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