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Her Alluring Eyes

My attention caught From across the room I glance Her alluring eyes I walk in capture I'm like a moth to a flame Drawn by her brown orbs In vision tranced Pupils of life attracted Absorbed by her looks * Poem by James Fraser, for Michael's J. Falotico' "Eyes First Meet" contest *

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Nicole Hawkins

Date: 4/9/2011 7:58:00 AM

Beautiful! Love the second senryu...congrats on your win :) -Nicole

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 4/5/2011 8:30:00 AM

i'm glad you won with this beauty. .like a moth to a flame,each verse attracts..tmfs :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 5:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win James in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/3/2011 7:31:00 PM

beautiful entry James, congrats on your win in the contest

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/2/2011 12:26:00 PM

"Drawn by her brown orbs" love that line James and this piece of yours.. Congratulations on your win in MJF's contest ;)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/2/2011 7:11:00 AM

Congratulations James on your well deserved win in the contest.--KASHINATH

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/2/2011 2:05:00 AM

Awesome James, like all three especially the third, congrats. Harry

Elaine George

Date: 4/2/2011 1:58:00 AM

Very captivating string Senryu, James. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/2/2011 12:12:00 AM

That is so awesome that you were able to enter this enchanting senryu series just in time, James :) Super congrats on your win :) way to go :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2011 10:52:00 PM

So I see you won! Congrulations,James. I just happened on this nice poem of yours and want to see all the other winners if I can! goodnight from Oregon!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/1/2011 9:43:00 PM

Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear James.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/1/2011 6:09:00 PM

Great writing James. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2011 4:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2011 3:19:00 PM

Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Michael, James

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2011 3:07:00 PM

james, sizzling piece that really is deserving of a great win in this tourney! :) huggs , nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/1/2011 3:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your amazing win in Michael's Contest, James! Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2011 2:42:00 PM

Can't believe I missed this earlier, James. It's fabulous! Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 2:28:00 PM

Congrats James on your wonderful win in Michael's cool contest luv with this exciting entry.. enjoy another chart topping win with luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/1/2011 2:28:00 PM

Congrats James on your win in my contest...

Eiken Laan

Date: 4/1/2011 11:35:00 AM

James, I really like these, especially the first one, wonderful:))

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 9:26:00 AM

Eloquently penned James and good luck in the contest.. the eyes ..the window to the soul..seem to have their own personality luv.. her brown orbs.. and heer alluring eyes .. capture u and us as we read ..happy weekend ..with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/1/2011 9:15:00 AM

Enjoyed how those brown eyes mesmerized you, James :) Wish you the best in the contest :)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/1/2011 9:07:00 AM

Excellent write here James!Enjoyed--kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2011 9:07:00 AM

Very very romantic and sensual write like a moth to be drawn to a flame, James