James Fraser Poet Senryu

Her Alluring Eyes

My attention caught
From across the room I glance
Her alluring eyes

I walk in capture
I'm like a moth to a flame
Drawn by her brown orbs

In vision tranced
Pupils of life attracted
Absorbed by her looks






* Poem by James Fraser, for Michael's J. Falotico' "Eyes First Meet" contest *

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Nicole Hawkins April 9, 2011 at 7:58 AM Beautiful! Love the second senryu...congrats on your win :) -Nicole

C.C Bloomsfield April 5, 2011 at 8:30 AM i'm glad you won with this beauty. .like a moth to a flame,each verse attracts..tmfs :)

Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 5:43 AM Congratulations on your win James in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts April 3, 2011 at 7:31 PM beautiful entry James, congrats on your win in the contest

Wilma Neels April 2, 2011 at 12:26 PM "Drawn by her brown orbs" love that line James and this piece of yours.. Congratulations on your win in MJF's contest ;)

Kash Poet April 2, 2011 at 7:11 AM Congratulations James on your well deserved win in the contest.--KASHINATH

Harry Horsman April 2, 2011 at 2:05 AM Awesome James, like all three especially the third, congrats. Harry

Elaine George April 2, 2011 at 1:58 AM Very captivating string Senryu, James. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 2, 2011 at 12:12 AM That is so awesome that you were able to enter this enchanting senryu series just in time, James :) Super congrats on your win :) way to go :)

Andrea Dietrich April 1, 2011 at 10:52 PM So I see you won! Congrulations,James. I just happened on this nice poem of yours and want to see all the other winners if I can! goodnight from Oregon!

Tahera Mannan April 1, 2011 at 9:43 PM Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear James.

Joyce Johnson April 1, 2011 at 6:09 PM Great writing James. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2011 at 4:20 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2011 at 3:19 PM Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Michael, James

Nette Onclaud April 1, 2011 at 3:07 PM james, sizzling piece that really is deserving of a great win in this tourney! :) huggs , nette

Audrey Haick April 1, 2011 at 3:01 PM Congratulations on your amazing win in Michael's Contest, James! Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire April 1, 2011 at 2:42 PM Can't believe I missed this earlier, James. It's fabulous! Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 1, 2011 at 2:28 PM Congrats James on your wonderful win in Michael's cool contest luv with this exciting entry.. enjoy another chart topping win with luv..

Michael J. Falotico April 1, 2011 at 2:28 PM Congrats James on your win in my contest...

Eiken Laan April 1, 2011 at 11:35 AM James, I really like these, especially the first one, wonderful:))

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 1, 2011 at 9:26 AM Eloquently penned James and good luck in the contest.. the eyes ..the window to the soul..seem to have their own personality luv.. her brown orbs.. and heer alluring eyes .. capture u and us as we read ..happy weekend ..with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 1, 2011 at 9:15 AM Enjoyed how those brown eyes mesmerized you, James :) Wish you the best in the contest :)

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2011 at 9:07 AM Very very romantic and sensual write like a moth to be drawn to a flame, James

Kash Poet April 1, 2011 at 9:07 AM Excellent write here James!Enjoyed--kashinath