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Her Senior Year

*for AG

Last leg home, the sun setting in the polluted haze of the city,
looks Like I feel, my thoughts a golden glow, every brushstroke

       I've painted filling the sky with my love for you...a painting
that will begin anew....with the sunrise
........with the sunrise

Though your footprints belong to you,
                                           my heart..... travels your path

Endless, as it should be,
                                         your destiny rewards my memory



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-for Brian's INTERVALS contest....COLOURS/PERCEPTION/HARMONY

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/30/2009 1:48:00 PM
Wow! This is really nice. I didn't expect a piece about love for this contest; but I guess anything fits and I think you hit the nail right on the head with this one. Congratulations on placing in this contest!
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Date: 9/30/2009 1:11:00 PM
JMG, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/30/2009 12:37:00 PM
Wonderful is the loving nature of this tender poem!! I love this one! Congrats, James...this is a stunning write! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 9/30/2009 7:06:00 AM
Dear James, Congratulation on your well deserved win in Brian's contest. Love lainie
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Date: 9/30/2009 3:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2009 12:55:00 AM
Congrats on you success in my contest Jim.Rgds Brian My latest contest Five&Twenty is now open
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Date: 9/13/2009 6:28:00 PM
Oh... Excellent Poem! Going into my Fav's... I Can See It... Your View... Your Artistic Use of Beautiful Words is Simply Magnific' MoonBee
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Date: 9/11/2009 3:35:00 AM
i can picture the sky..and the Sunrise..so romantic,Celina
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Date: 9/10/2009 7:16:00 AM
I love it, good luck in the contest, I am anxious to see the next assignment.;)
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Date: 9/10/2009 12:57:00 AM
one of your best --a fav...i love the painted sky with love..if only we all could paint it,,,,,,..i love the sunrise..Charma
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Date: 9/9/2009 7:02:00 AM
Mr. Goff,..what a beautiful entry ! What a beautiful father you are ! It shows ! james
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Date: 9/9/2009 5:40:00 AM
Excellent entry, James MG, I love this contests. Don't you?!? Keep the good writing going! And good luck to us all in the contest. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 9/8/2009 11:44:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my experimental contest Jim.Rgds Brian
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