Her

The rain above us fell faster than we had ever seen before She laughed as I told her I'd be with her forever and more We held hands hiding from the rain Now that she's gonna I feel imense pain My heart beats slower now My sobs sound like a dying cow If I could only have her again I'd never leave her like back then

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/10/2024 11:56:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2016 8:54:00 PM

Alex, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/14/2013 8:02:00 AM

Good syntax and rhyme-- sad but nice write. Welcome to P/Soup.