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The rain above us fell faster than we had ever seen before She laughed as I told her I'd be with her forever and more We held hands hiding from the rain Now that she's gonna I feel imense pain My heart beats slower now My sobs sound like a dying cow If I could only have her again I'd never leave her like back then

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Date: 2/12/2016 8:54:00 PM
Alex, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 5/14/2013 8:02:00 AM
Good syntax and rhyme-- sad but nice write. Welcome to P/Soup.
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