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time drags on slowly -clock ticking- it seems that it is always morning when she never seems to sleep. eyes opening, glassy, tentative and sore. still weary from the many tears spilled the night before. she picks up her guitar and weeps even more mourning the loss of her love, her sanity, herself. strumming a song in monotone, she listens to echoes through walls of stone filling the silent empty spaces. where he once stood at one time, and she smiled and thought "this one is for keeps, and mine, all mine"... that spot on the carpet where now she only cries and paces

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/19/2016 2:07:00 PM
Megan Eidelbach, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT
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Date: 8/11/2009 12:27:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am wishing you the best in your future writing Megan. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2009 9:02:00 AM
Firstly, the title is awesome...love the idea of monotone and pacing in the same spot in the carpet..this is very good...
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