Her

My Favorite Teacher

It might have felt lost,
In the big world of old age pillars;
 once those tiny hands slipped away,
 from being her fathers fillers.

From afar came Her,
 Assuring him Of me;
and hers was I to take care of.
 With Her had my father shared;
my falls and winter cold silences.

In Amongst the marks of excellence
she applauded my bits of writings,
In amongst whole classes neglect
she approved my ideas considerate of 
 some `relevance`.

Upheld were all those who didn’t even try;
I sat silently,
 while she upheld Mywork `well described `
 while, My falling drawbacks were in well disguise.

 It might have felt lost ,
If I didn’t have the direction
to turn my shortcomings ;
to learn a skill
 Beautifully to soak myself in.

In whole of the chaotic chaos
Set up around Me,
 there was one escape to fresh start 
with her reading of the stories ;
From those each lesson she read
 in English literature;
Her  each pause and flawless dialect,
gave words to my frozen picture.

Now Hers are the words I speak
 Hers is this world I have meet;
Made Me look beyond Restrictions
and  become this  Person
 who Breathes this fresh air of Fiction.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/1/2019 10:59:00 PM
A great tribute , Sonali , congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Sonali Thakur
Date: 11/9/2019 5:23:00 AM
Thank you soo much Eve . I am glad you liked it.
Date: 10/31/2019 2:15:00 PM
- Sonali. congratulations on your great winning poem - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/9/2019 5:24:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating. Means a lot:)
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