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Hemlock Valentine

The image I imagined, Alas! It has not passed. For I am afire with carnal desire, unquenched and dying fast! My sweetest bane, I shan't complain- you are my Love, my Death, my Pain! Through my heart, a stake! Oh, do indicate the grave where Love was lain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/14/2014 11:00:00 PM
You certainly have a way with words. Well written. Now to Tweet.
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Date: 2/17/2014 12:04:00 PM
Thanks, Scott :)
Date: 2/8/2014 4:10:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful friend. Impeccable flow and rhyme.
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Date: 2/17/2014 12:04:00 PM
Thanks as always, my friend! :)
Date: 2/5/2014 7:52:00 AM
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/5/2014 8:07:00 AM
Gotcha; replied :)
Date: 2/5/2014 4:08:00 AM
OH MY GOODNESS!!!! OH ME, OH MY!!!! THIS IS OUT OF THIS WORLD!!! Just...absolutely...PERFECT. TO my favs.... :) I read your last one...One women! ;) You are quite the writer, my dear!
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Date: 2/5/2014 4:44:00 AM
Wow. Thanks, Eileen; you've just made my morning awesome. Many thanks and much appreciated, hon :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/5/2014 4:44:00 AM
Pleasure was all mine! :)

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