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Helpless Skies

Rocks forming a bond Blocking unwanted entry The sky scream for help for Raul Moreno contest

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Jay Loveless

Date: 4/8/2010 11:26:00 AM

hmm, i like this, brings interesting thoughts/images to my mind. love the line "the sky screams for help" really musical in a sence. always .:rain:.

Skat A

Date: 4/7/2010 8:43:00 AM

Enjoyed ! thank you.

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/3/2010 3:24:00 PM

Hey Faleshia, Thnx for reading and posting your kind comments on my piece. I'm asking Audrey to post this comment on my behalf...Jimmy

Constance La France

Date: 3/29/2010 12:04:00 PM

This is a lovely haiku... now your assignment in my contest, In Search of the Human Mind, will be friendship.... love Constance

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2010 10:38:00 AM

This sounds real good . deeply mother nature can destroy that bond. Nice!

Susan Keogh

Date: 3/28/2010 9:27:00 AM

Powerful stuff. This was a perfect discription of the picture. Thank you for your kind words and best of luck in the contest. Susan

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/28/2010 8:13:00 AM

I dio like these pictures and especially the last line, Faleshia! Have nice Easter holidays and thank you for your comments...Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/27/2010 2:18:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry today Faleshia. It is an excellent poem and I am wishing you the best in the contest.. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/26/2010 6:54:00 PM

looks like moon rocks in that picture or salt I wonder?

Date: 3/26/2010 4:13:00 PM

Interesting use of personification for a creative view. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen