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There once was a space man named Tommy
who became a little balmy
when he met some alien creatures
with very strange features,
he cried, "I want my Mommy!"


 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ for Carolyn's Alien Limerick Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 20, 2010 at 2:26 PM
nice limerick, i do recall this contest, enjoyed, smiles,..p.d.
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March 23, 2010 at 4:42 AM
Congratulations Sue, on your win in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire, with this very cute limerick. Laughingly, Dane Ann
White Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 8:09 AM
Good one Sue Congrats
Freeman Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 11:38 AM
Congratulations on your win Sue. Agape, Moses
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March 20, 2010 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations on your win Sue.-Robert
Taylor Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 9:42 AM
P.S. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
Taylor Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 9:38 AM
Very comical, Sue. Nice write. Thanks for your comments.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 7:22 PM
Congrats Sue on your winning poem and placement in the Limerick contest.. great fun poem and special win for u to so enjoy.. thankxxx for your lovely comments on my poetry always.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Johnson Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 5:15 PM
And who can blame him? Con your win. Joyce
Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations Sue on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James
Devonshire Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 10:28 AM
This is really a cute limerick, Sue! Congrats on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 5:51 PM
My Bio!!!!!!!! good luck in the contest earthling. Vince
Knop Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 9:04 AM
I thank I would do so, too! Funny Limerick, Sue and thank you for your comment...Gert
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March 13, 2010 at 12:30 PM
What a good laugh I had at the end. i enjoy this poem.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Very funny Sue and a really fun Limerick to read... good luck in the contest.. my entry is Mission from Mars... good write ...great fun ...luv.. Linda-Marie..
Haick Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Another great Limerick!! Way to go Sue!! I wish you good luck in Carolyn's "Alien Limerick Contest! Peace, love, Audrey
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March 12, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Thanks for starting my day off with something that has me smiling. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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March 11, 2010 at 11:48 PM
Best wishes in the contest Sue.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Spring is here in England though typically quite cold these past few days.
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March 11, 2010 at 7:08 PM
Sue, This one is cute. Real cute. (NOTE: I put all of that extra stuff to help me remember poetry forms, etc. when I read/work on poems off-line.) Smiles, Dane Ann
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