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Help!

NEED HELP!  I can't stop thinking
and I don't know what to do
the words they keep on coming
seems that they are never through.

How they grow and multiply
and fill up all my brain
which is now in overflow
and driving me insane!

I think they plan to drown me
in a poets wordy sea
need a way to slow the words
still growing inside me.

I really need some answers
and I really need them fast!
Can anybody HELP ME?
Worried how long I will last!

Trapped in a poets nightmare
knowing if they go away
I will want them back again
and for them I will pray!

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Arany P. Date: 2/17/2009 10:02:00 PM 'in a poets wordy sea...' that is my favourite line... like your imaginations!! do you really need help..?? nice one, Robin!! ~ Arany Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 2/17/2009 1:28:00 PM Nice imagination Robin, this poem rocks. "In a poets wordy sea" my favorite line...Raul Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 2/17/2009 9:17:00 AM dont worry when you go dry you'll go dry. just write while that Spirit is still with you because when He leaves you don't know when He'll be back. john Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 2/17/2009 12:37:00 AM It's easy QR ; Just write onnnnnnn .... Amen . Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/16/2009 2:21:00 PM Get a tape recorder LOL. I write on napkins on the steering column driving at 65 miles per hour, not a good one to ask! Light & Love Debbie Login to Reply

Date: 2/16/2009 12:54:00 PM I think most writers would welcome your influx of ideas. Enjoy them when they come! Writer's block sure isn't any fun. Enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing it and for your ongoing encouragement. Karen Login to Reply

Ronald Bingham Date: 2/16/2009 11:45:00 AM Robin, what a delight. I hope the words never stop. Blessings, Ron Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/16/2009 9:47:00 AM Robin, you certainly don't drown in "a poet's wordy sea." You have mastered the talent to craft short, beautiful verses that hit the target. Alas, 'til I who drowns in that sea. This is such a nice read, and I'm sure many of us on Poetrysoup can relate to the feeling of having words "growing inside" them! And thanks for directing me to Brian's explanation of the footle. As for me, "Keep tryin', ain't rhymin'." See, still too many syllables! Carolyn Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 2/16/2009 9:07:00 AM This strikes a chord or two Robin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 2/16/2009 9:07:00 AM This strikes a chord or two Robin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 2/16/2009 8:35:00 AM Robin - I certainly can relate to this poem - i have the same problem - Sometimes in the dead of night I'll awaken with a poem just running through my mind in hyper drive - Great job on this - God Bless, MJ Login to Reply

Deirdre Omaidin Date: 2/16/2009 8:21:00 AM I really think this is very cleverly done Robin, you've asked for help, this is all I can suggest: Switching off can be a problem I know just what you mean Let's go and see the hypnotist And wipe em all out clean. Regards.Déirdre Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 2/16/2009 8:08:00 AM ....because "Precious Robin," from what I have been blessed to behold thus far from within "Your Heart & Souls Wonderous Revealings," you never know what glorious piece of art, "Your Splendors" shall produce out of nowhere, next!!?~"My Love Always Unto You Dear Lady & All You Love, Forever, John!!!":) Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 2/16/2009 8:03:00 AM Smile~You always seem to have an over-flowing of words, rushing through your wonderful thoughts dear lady!!!~"Hello Precious & Gifted & Beautiful Robin!!!"~Well, my sincere advice would be, always carry a note pad and pen with you~even by your bedside let them wait~until, there is no denying, that the wonderfully word filled dam is about to break....cont.... Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 2/16/2009 7:31:00 AM Love this fun write my friend. The words are flowing..isn't that a blessing? Jot them down fast and keep them n reserve so that when that blocks hit..and it will..you can fall back on this words. Love this..thanks for the love on my poem Robin..greatly appreciated. Login to Reply

Laurie Ginn Date: 2/16/2009 7:11:00 AM Okay so nope youre just plain stuck.....be careful what you wish for cause it may come true,,dont ya wish they would say that and you wished for somethign so cool and it'd come true but noooooooo,,its always the thing you no you really shouldnt want that comes true,,,sorry I digress.,,whoops and whistlesss, Laurie Login to Reply