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Pleasantries of passivity before the pinch of shrill cold ripples over the landscape in the suburbs of Buffalo— before its trees crispin and leaves twirl about— giggling like school girls, rippling in the claustrophobic dark. My existence, contingent on three months: conceived in January - a honeymoon baby, born in October, yet September is pivotal to my existence as two sets of twins were born, one year and a few miles apart. September is neither hot nor cold in the passing of Spring - I must state that this intermediary stage is not prosaic - its conjoined arm in arm seasons for lovers, families, bundles of joy, apple of the eyes. Climbing of trees, climatic offspring of seedlings, sweet and sour opposites attract the saplings and their mentors — momentous happenings that thrill through muscle memories of September. Outdoors to explore as air conditioners cool off, as central heating waits in line, as school dances erupt, and festivals bring their baskets of fruit for those jiggling pocketfuls of change. Exchange of hopefulness, the eye of the storm with its zephyr zealousness— fertile ground of safety on simmer. One honeymoon baby drifted South toward peaches, pecans and the annual Yellow Daisy Festival. Roots of September— my smile wide, in dungarees, seasonal daring, my squeeze, and succulent sweetheart. Hello September, a selfie-group hug, a gregarious greeting. Slipping from Summer, swaddling into such colder winds. 9/18/2021

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Date: 9/21/2021 6:37:00 AM
Very descriptive work. It has good flow, rhythm and rhyme. I enjoyed reading it today. It is supposed to be fall like for a few days starting late tomorrow. I am eagerly anticipating the time. Your visit to my page was supportive. Sara
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Date: 9/20/2021 11:25:00 AM
I am ready for all of this and more Kim "of hopefulness, the eye of the storm with its zephyr zealousness— fertile ground of safety on simmer. One honeymoon baby drifted South toward peaches, pecans and the annual Yellow Daisy Festival." Wonderful!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2021 2:52:00 PM
Thank you so much! Hugs
Date: 9/18/2021 12:22:00 PM
Lovely welcome to September, Kim. Enjoyed the tenor of your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2021 12:54:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/18/2021 11:43:00 AM
Happy memories Kim, it is indeed a beautiful month, just before autumn starts to bite. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2021 12:54:00 PM
Thank you! Blessings to you, dear friend!
Date: 9/18/2021 9:00:00 AM
Brilliant. September is my fav month. I trust you get a high rating.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2021 12:54:00 PM
We will see. :)

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