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Hello, September

Hello, September - You crept in so quickly the calendar is halfway through with you! My birthday came and went. Wishes that I made - I hope they'll all come true. Hello, September - Thank you for the roses which on our bushes bloom violet and red. Three weeks ago just buds - they now stand high and way above my head! Hello, September - Mornings now are cooler. Gone is August's horrid heat at midday. October, please delay. Forever, dear September, could you stay? Sept. 16, 2021 For 'A STRAND (1045)' Poetry Contest

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Ann Peck

Date: 1/6/2022 10:50:00 AM

Dear Andrea, Your poem is so beautiful, especially the last line :) Congratulations on your First Place win!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/4/2022 9:30:00 PM

Great poesy! Beautiful discussion, consultation and request with the months. Congratulations!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/26/2021 5:29:00 AM

You said so much in such a short space. Really a wonderful write. Congrats on your win.

Joseph May

Date: 9/21/2021 10:20:00 AM

Wonderful write Andrea, Congrats on your win

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/20/2021 10:27:00 AM

Love your conversation with September, Andrea. Such a wonderfully creative and unique take on the theme! Congratulations for your win! Blessings of the season for you.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2021 2:33:00 PM

Dropping back with many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/18/2021 8:14:00 PM

A wonderful poem about September…a lingering though! Nice!

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/18/2021 5:37:00 PM

Hi Andrea, You've penned a lovely tribute to your birthday month. The days are going by so fast it will be 2022 before you know it. Best wishes in the contest. Well done:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 9/18/2021 7:22:00 AM

September Mornings now are cooler. Gone is August's horrid heat at midday. October, please delay.. I love the cooler weather. Great entry :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/18/2021 3:58:00 AM

So lovely my friend... yes the days are rolling so fast... and yes, your birthday month is so special for YOU... and your dear ones... Enjoy every moment of every day sweet Ria... before winter arrives... Hugs... ~ Ani

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/17/2021 8:43:00 PM

This is so lovely and descriptive, Andrea. Janice

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/17/2021 5:32:00 PM

Hello Andrea ... enjoyed reading this poem with its blessing for September. We are in early spring now with wind and pollen dominating - thank you Andrea - Lindsay

Jan Allison

Date: 9/17/2021 11:50:00 AM

what a charming autumnal rhyme Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

DM Babbit

Date: 9/17/2021 8:23:00 AM

Harvest time for earth. Nicely phrased.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/17/2021 6:18:00 AM

Enjoyed this welcome to September, Andrea.

Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/17/2021 5:03:00 AM

Just Lovely! ...with a lovely message. I loved September the most when I lived in Buffalo. Calm weather, cool evenings, the trees tuning color. And my tomatoes and peppers were ripe, too! ...Fran

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/17/2021 3:50:00 AM

Your right, September is well underway, and has brought a welcome change in the weather..Well done Andrea...Delice

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/17/2021 3:30:00 AM

Here, it's the monsoon season but we enjoy the rain, as we need it badly... Though the weeds in our garden multiply like anything, we never complaint rain... Loved your verses, especially I enjoyed reading the last stanza... Beautifully done, Andrea ...