Hello September

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Hello, September!
                                          We meet ~
                  with crimson-tinged golden-fringed excitement,
                let's rendezvous with an enthralling rhapsody anew!!

                                paths are strewn with puce,
                            tangerine, cerise, orange leaves...
            swirling, twirling, whirling intoxicated under the sapphire sky -
                       luring us gambol in a fairyland of colours!
                                       fall’s magical show!
               sheer beauty of red and gold leaves swooshing about ~

               watch the clouds dizzily dreamy in a champagne light,
              watch with nostalgic wistfulness canada geese returning -
                      a graceful fascinating formation in the sky!
                             butterflies seductively kissing
                      bewitching flowers under a luminous sun,
                           watch robin enticingly singing
                           luscious summer’s farewell song !

                         a decoupage of kaleidoscopic hues -
                     red, golden, amber leaves waltzing down ~

                         triumphant summer leaves letting
                        mysterious autumn dazzle the world !
            
                                     Hello September!


                                     September 14, 2021
                                        THIRD PLACE
                       For " Hello September" Poetry Contest
                              Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

                      A Brian Strand Freed Verse Poetry Contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2022 4:33:00 AM

Your winner in Brian's contest was creative and expressive. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/2/2022 11:06:00 AM

Oh Mala, I love reading this magnificent gem, based in the color and majesty of autumn, once again. Congratulations on the accolades this wonderful greeting to fall has once again received! Truly deserved! Blessings to you dear friend!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/26/2021 5:26:00 AM

I love your words to express the colors of fall. So beautiful a picture you have woven. Congrats on your top win.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/20/2021 10:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Mala. I love the personification of your annual meeting with this vibrant season that you so beautifully illustrate with your vivid images. In this season of change, you have planted seeds of hope for the future while celebrating the passing of autumn. Sending you all the blessings of the season dear friend.

JCB Brul

Date: 9/19/2021 7:27:00 PM

Colorful and vivid imagery that makes this splendid poem a “stand out”! Congratulations!!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2021 2:20:00 PM

wonderful imagery Mala, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/19/2021 12:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write and picture. I love your "Hello Again, September." So very colorful. Have a blessed day................