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Hello September

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fresh autumn crispness fills my lungs in early morn as thoughts of you swirl in my head vagrant stray musings weigh heavy on my heart we’re not the youths we used to be back when no strings meant no consequences yet at the same time so very little matters in the grand scheme of things except in matters of the heart AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on September 12, 2021 for HELLO SEPTEMBER contest sponsored by MYSTIC ROSE ROSE

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Date: 9/15/2021 3:26:00 PM
'matters of the heart' in the end they are all that matter Line... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 9/14/2021 4:36:00 PM
Line by Line By LINE!! Great Write!!
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Date: 9/15/2021 12:26:00 PM
Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Chuck ~
Date: 9/13/2021 5:32:00 PM
Very Nice Line ! WWWWW : Well Written Words With Wisdom.
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Date: 9/14/2021 6:20:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy ~ most appreciated
Date: 9/13/2021 2:29:00 AM
Lovely ode to September Line...Delice
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Date: 9/14/2021 6:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, Delice ~
Date: 9/12/2021 5:29:00 PM
The last stanza -- a veritable seminar on what matters in love. Three thumbs up. ~ Count Wolf
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Date: 9/14/2021 6:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon ~

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