Hello, January, We Need To Talk

I've been waiting up late for you,
watching the clock like a featured film.
Suspense waits no longer.
Here you arrive at 12 am
with a firework's bang.
At this hour,
this is your greeting?
Hello, January,
we need to talk....
I haven't seen you in months,
and you come barging in.
You come on so strong,
but sometimes you can be so cold.
You let me down last time you were here,
like torrents of hail and snowy hills.
Ah, snow can be fun, though,
and you did warm me up
with hot cocoa and a blanket.
Thanks for your reviving comforts.
What I'm trying to say is
that I've missed you,
and I forgive you.
I hope you can forgive
my past as well.
I'm sorry about my negative attitude
and my disorganization.
We should go on walks more
and eat healthy meals together.
I promise I'll be kinder,
and I'll try to appreciate
all the good you offer me.
Can we now start anew?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Inman Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:24 PM
What a lovely write Juliet.
Puri Goswami Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 1:43 PM
we have to wait for next January ..... till we cherish this and many before..... .... nice & crisply written....juliet
J.T. Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 1:38 PM
Wow. this is going into my favorites. Great job
Phookan Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 8:12 AM
A very well written poem. Congrats Juliet on your win! hugs..
Mehta Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 8:21 AM
Enjoyed your expressions on January and congrats on the win, Juliet
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 2:24 PM
- Hello January, contest is judged / / Sponsored by: Vicky Tsiluma - Congratulations on your winning poem,Juliet. - Nice to take part - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ligon Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 11:44 PM
Thanks, Anne Lise. : )
May Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 11:48 AM
Great write and win Juliet...congrats
Ligon Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 11:54 PM
Thanks, Joseph.
Tsiluma Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 10:00 AM
I love this Juliet- right from the title, we need to talk - signaling the seriousness of the conversation. Very well written - honest and perceptive. I also love the question at the end - I can almost hear January answering 'YES!'. Well done!
Ligon Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 11:41 PM
Thanks so much, Vicki, and thanks for the writing topic. It was fun. Poetic hugs, Juliet.
Garg Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 3:09 AM
A wonderful write, Juliet. I hope you win.
Garg Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 3:47 AM
Congratulations dear..................
Ligon Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 11:55 PM
Thanks for your blessing, Archana.
May Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 8:39 PM
Very good write Juliet...that last line is brilliant...best wishes
Williams Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 1:33 PM
Hello Juliet I am glad you spoke as this good....David
Lamoureux Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Brilliant! I loved it from start to finish.
Kelley Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 12:44 AM
This is absolutely fantastic
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 12:44 AM
wow, you did an AWESOME job with this challenge. One of the best I've seen in this category. It was next on my list to do and I really need to think something up!!
Tacito Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 12:25 PM
I loved this read! The title alone had me hooked and made me smile. We do need to remember though that every month is a chance for US to make it right and be positive about each day gifted to us. Excellent job! =D
Aldea Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 9:26 PM
nice Juliet, I enjoyed reading.... regards, Che
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