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Hello Dad

Cool waters of the lagoon bobbing a bit due to the waterfall I stick my hand in and smile it is exactly as I remembered it my own little place, private. Where my dad and I used to sail. I steady my boat and dive in. No waters are ever as comforting as these waters there is a mystical feeling surrounding me now Hello Dad, I say, feeling his presence.

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Date: 10/16/2022 8:29:00 AM
Lovely, poignant piece honoring your dad. He must have been a fine, fine father.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/17/2022 12:19:00 AM
He really was one of the sweetest people I have met in my entire life and I have met a lot of people.

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