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Hello, Aficionados: Color Me Forgiven

If you are reading my poem For rhyme and meter, you May turn the page for my age Wants to tell you a tale of Raising children, falling on toys, Diseases and broken bones, Nights of fear and Days of joy. Of loss of a husband and Middle class money, Too much for stretching, Too little to spend; Of in-laws in-loves and Millions of out-laws. I will tell you of surgeries, Heart stuff and stents Learning mechanics to fix Old cars that wouldn’t start and bent; Sewing machines and mending jeans; Strong thread that ran through The silken colors of love, That came down freely from above. But if you yearn for rhyme and meter, Move on, change these lines and Color me forgiven.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/30/2019 12:07:00 PM
If it doesn't rhyme...it's not a crime...if it doesn't swing...no big thing...if there is no meter...the beauty is in the eye of the reader...great verse Sunlite...happy endings...^WW^
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Date: 4/28/2019 4:43:00 PM
I do not mind if a poem has no meter if it is written as well as this one is! Anyway, it flowed well and that is what mattered, and it was very REAL, which means for me, relatable!!
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Date: 4/27/2019 12:56:00 AM
This is good stuff, Sunlite... excellent wordplay matched by some warm, some poignant and some sad musings, all very well expressed.
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Date: 4/26/2019 6:16:00 PM
Some of the best poetry comes without rhyme or meter; write!
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Date: 4/25/2019 4:20:00 PM
staying on this page for more doses of precious milestones... splendid read, ML.. huggs
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