Hello

You
I know
My old foe
Slinking dark doubt
Then light said hello
To my shy smile
Banishing
Fear of
You.

1/15/19

for Hello contest
sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 1/20/2019 1:27:00 PM
- Hello, Michelle :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/21/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thanks, appreciate it!
Date: 1/20/2019 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Michelle, on Silent One's "Hello" contest! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/21/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Date: 1/20/2019 7:18:00 AM
Nice ninette Michelle.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/21/2019 1:11:00 PM
Thank you for placing me in your contest!
Date: 1/20/2019 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Michelle :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/21/2019 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 1/19/2019 8:15:00 PM
Such a creative, profound write for the contest---in a unique, unexpected format. I like your chances in the contest! :) gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/24/2019 3:36:00 PM
Hey, Michelle! It looks as if your experiment worked quite well! :) Congrats on your win in the contest! Best wishes, Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/21/2019 1:10:00 PM
Thanks, I'm experimenting with new types of poems-
Date: 1/15/2019 5:44:00 PM
We need to banish fear from our lives, so our Hellos can be powerful and true. Nice entry dear Michelle, hope you have a wonderful evening. Hugs
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/15/2019 10:51:00 PM
Thanks, hugs to you too!
Date: 1/15/2019 4:23:00 PM
Lovely ninette, Michelle. They are not easy, but this one does roll off in a nice sweet loving way.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/15/2019 10:51:00 PM
Appreciate that, thanks, Caren!
Date: 1/15/2019 3:41:00 PM
Excellent Michelle! Good luck in the contest :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/15/2019 10:50:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 1/15/2019 1:00:00 PM
I like it!!!! <3
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/15/2019 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen!
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