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Hell In the Stars

Hell in The Stars Befool yourself into believing In words And fool yourself into thinking You’ve heard “the” word All of our knowledge Is designed by human hands Look a little deeper Look out towards the stars We are planet bound The same as a plant inside its pot Still we know the galaxies are there Just like a pot plant comprehends Its nature is to live In a field It is the demonstration of arrogance to believe That we have the answers to everything The greatest mystery Is how all this came to be Yet you define it with your books You even think that in your words You can capture what it is That breathes Eternally What are the stars to you except imagery What are they to you but romance What are they to you Other than a figment of your imagination What do they represent Nothing more Than your Denial What do we wake up to be This planet and our own mediocrity Or do we wake up To feel all the suns which we call stars And the entire expanse of creation Witnessed In our eyes Do we understand that Hell Is as much an aspect Of heaven As is everything else A planetary definition made by limits Does not define Reality And I know; being challenged you will turn to your books of faith. I know you will turn to each other, for support. You will look towards the comfort of an easy excuse. A human explanation of what humanity can’t explain, you will turn away from the evident proof of your eyes, yet again. You will choose to deny the stars and every portent they contain and instead; look towards a heaven which simpleton faithlings say belief cannot resist. While creation happens all around you you will choose not to exist Give it another Prophet and another thousand years For your stupidity To stop up your eyes and your ears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/7/2010 6:12:00 AM
Talk about a bad perception and will you have of life. still here is a nice Sweet Sidney, asking what did i do to you, as if I care hahahah : ) Thank you Colin I am enjoying all the useless comments you are leaving me. I will return them with lots of love. May I ask what John did to you. I get it he does not leave you any sweet comments. He probably does not like bullies like you. I 've got to go. And comment your fun poems, take care,..love SId,=poet destroyer
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Date: 7/23/2009 3:42:00 AM
this is definitely a good challenge to induce in all the faithful believers to shake them out of an apathetic state of mindlessness,though personally I feel you're making just as many assumptions as they are on creation and existence.none of us can prove anything.you put your faith in your senses and the world around you,they put their faith in their simpleton heaven.Nobody is actually faithless, they just put it into different places that validate the way they feel.thanks for sharing yourself.
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Date: 7/23/2009 3:30:00 AM
in case you haven't figured it out yet we all do this to confirm ourselves.otherwise what's the point in a site that allows users to comment on each other's work.some of us sound nice and gentle and some of us sound bitter and depressed.either way it's more interesting to me then a counter of how many hits we get to a page so I've stuck with it no matter how many strange strangers comment on my stuff, and there have been quite a few. still I'm curious what he wrote that pissed you off so much...
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Date: 7/18/2009 1:18:00 PM
This write reminds me why you are one of my favorite poets, Colin. Some folks look at the stars and have no desire to explore the possibilities our universe contains. Your open mindedness in this poem defines you as a master explorer, one who is willing to check out all potential explanations. As always, you have truly inspired me. Love, Carolyn
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