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Hell In a Handmaiden Basket

He hath become religious of late
prostrated before the virgin Mary
Cornflower blues blown to wild violets
and thin lines puckering in concentration

Prayers spilling in loud sputters from his mouth
She hath listened a time or two
to testimonies led by callused hands
Run lukewarm holy water upon him

Coaxing gentle promises from cold maidens
candlelight vigils by the goose feather altar
Ordered 10 Hail Marys, and 5 Our fathers
and she bled for both of their sins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/9/2014 2:46:00 PM
Wow, very deep concept type poem. A.E. Amazing choice of imagery, and detail. I'm still deciphering it, but it's no doubt enjoyable in its writing style. Outstanding piece overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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