Jan Allison Poet Roundel

Notes About The Poem

FICTIONAL WRITE FOR WRITE 11 BEAUTIFUL LINES CONTEST SPONSORED BY CONSTANCE LA FRANCE 4/15/25

 

 

Hell Hath No Fury

"It takes more than a band aid plaster to mend a broken heart". Quote by Poet

I warned her not to steal my guy
but sadly this was not the case.
She's trouble and I won't deny
I warned her!

I found them naked at my place,
I'm seething I'm not gonna lie -
revenge is etched upon my face!

"I'll kill you both," I loudly cry
as I hit them with a bronze vase.
So now you'll know the reason why
I warned her!

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Duke Beaufort April 22, 2025 at 12:46 PM OMG Jan, such violence! In the poem at least a warning had been given. I guess people do get mad and act rashly. We hope our parents don't. Take care and smiles!! They should have at least gone to a motel!

Tania Kitchin April 19, 2025 at 2:50 PM Jan, wonderfully creative, congratulations on your first place win. Jan Allison April 21, 2025 at 3:56 AM thanks Tania it's my first attempt at this form it was fun :-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith April 19, 2025 at 10:36 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this creative write/story again. Happy Easter... Have a blessed day with your win................ Jan Allison April 21, 2025 at 3:55 AM thanks Paula :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich April 17, 2025 at 10:58 PM Well done. Jan. Congrats Jan Allison April 21, 2025 at 3:55 AM thanks Andrea :-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane April 16, 2025 at 7:13 AM Atta girl. Loved your response to a certain comment, Jan. Hugs, chick. Jan Allison April 16, 2025 at 9:28 AM It paid off using rhyme zone as in the UK we say the word like varse but it fitted in so well with the way you say 'vase' hugs jan xx Jan Allison April 16, 2025 at 9:27 AM I'm really thrilled to get a first place Lin! hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2025 at 6:36 AM - suddenly I was back .... with a congrats on your winning poem, Jan :) Jan Allison April 16, 2025 at 9:26 AM Oh, I'm so delighted it placed in the contest, thanks for the good news:-) hugs jan x

Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2025 at 5:04 AM - A tendon I can imagine ... :) .... "throw the trash" :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Happy Easter, Jan :) - hugs Jan Allison April 16, 2025 at 9:25 AM Thanks Anne-Lise:-) xx

Paula Goldsmith April 15, 2025 at 12:33 PM I enjoyed reading this creative write/story. Love the true quote. Great Picture... "Good luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful spring day and a Blessed Easter.......... Jan Allison April 15, 2025 at 4:50 PM thanks Paula:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane April 15, 2025 at 6:28 AM I think I feel a tumbleweed blowing around. Hell hath no fury like a woman poet scorned? If there is beauty to be found, it's in courage. Jan Allison April 15, 2025 at 8:27 AM Agreed lol but it's dust in the wind lol:-) I agree with your take on beauty :-) hugs Jan x

Kim Rodrigues April 15, 2025 at 6:13 AM Just walk away from the guy and his … lol! That is just crazy! I would imagine that the longer she was with him and the more unexpected that bronze vase would increase in size and heft. Quote is great! Jan Allison April 15, 2025 at 8:23 AM Thanks Kim, i had fun writing this one and trying a different form :-) hugs Jan xx

Oliver Mckeithan April 14, 2025 at 6:19 PM Great poem Jan. Like this but Constance wants 11 beautiful lines. Not sure this is "beautiful:) Tania Kitchin April 19, 2025 at 2:49 PM Jan, this is beautifully creative. Jan Allison April 15, 2025 at 8:22 AM Thanks for your concern Oliver but I enter contests for fun and will let the sponsor decide