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FICTIONAL WRITE FOR WRITE 11 BEAUTIFUL LINES CONTEST SPONSORED BY CONSTANCE LA FRANCE 4/15/25

Hell Hath No Fury

"It takes more than a band aid plaster to mend a broken heart". Quote by Poet

I warned her not to steal my guy
but sadly this was not the case.
She's trouble and I won't deny
I warned her!

I found them naked at my place,
I'm seething I'm not gonna lie -
revenge is etched upon my face!

"I'll kill you both," I loudly cry
as I hit them with a bronze vase.
So now you'll know the reason why
I warned her!

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/22/2025 12:46:00 PM

OMG Jan, such violence! In the poem at least a warning had been given. I guess people do get mad and act rashly. We hope our parents don't. Take care and smiles!! They should have at least gone to a motel!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/19/2025 2:50:00 PM

Jan, wonderfully creative, congratulations on your first place win.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2025 3:56:00 AM

thanks Tania it's my first attempt at this form it was fun :-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/19/2025 10:36:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this creative write/story again. Happy Easter... Have a blessed day with your win................

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2025 3:55:00 AM

thanks Paula :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2025 10:58:00 PM

Well done. Jan. Congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2025 3:55:00 AM

thanks Andrea :-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 4/16/2025 7:13:00 AM

Atta girl. Loved your response to a certain comment, Jan. Hugs, chick.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2025 9:28:00 AM

It paid off using rhyme zone as in the UK we say the word like varse but it fitted in so well with the way you say 'vase' hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2025 9:27:00 AM

I'm really thrilled to get a first place Lin! hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2025 6:36:00 AM

- suddenly I was back .... with a congrats on your winning poem, Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2025 9:26:00 AM

Oh, I'm so delighted it placed in the contest, thanks for the good news:-) hugs jan x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2025 5:04:00 AM

- A tendon I can imagine ... :) .... "throw the trash" :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Happy Easter, Jan :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2025 9:25:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise:-) xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/15/2025 12:33:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this creative write/story. Love the true quote. Great Picture... "Good luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful spring day and a Blessed Easter..........

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2025 4:50:00 PM

thanks Paula:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 4/15/2025 6:28:00 AM

I think I feel a tumbleweed blowing around. Hell hath no fury like a woman poet scorned? If there is beauty to be found, it's in courage.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2025 8:27:00 AM

Agreed lol but it's dust in the wind lol:-) I agree with your take on beauty :-) hugs Jan x

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/15/2025 6:13:00 AM

Just walk away from the guy and his … lol! That is just crazy! I would imagine that the longer she was with him and the more unexpected that bronze vase would increase in size and heft. Quote is great!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2025 8:23:00 AM

Thanks Kim, i had fun writing this one and trying a different form :-) hugs Jan xx